Fic: On My Shoulder; In My Heart

Mar 29, 2012 13:05


Title: On My Shoulder; In My Heart
Author: yellow_pomelo
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: pre-Dean/Castiel, Hallucifer 
Spoilers: 7.17
Warnings: None.
Word Count: ~2, 600
Disclaimer: I do not own Supernatural or any of it's characters. 
Summary: Coda to 7.17 The Born-Again Identity.

Notes: My first fic in a very long time. Please excuse my rusty writing, and I just ( Read more... )

dean/castiel, fic:spn

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cmdc March 30 2012, 05:43:36 UTC
Wow, that was amazing. My poor heart! You are not rusty at all.

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yellow_pomelo April 14 2012, 00:53:43 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad to see I haven't lost it.

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afallenseraphim March 30 2012, 07:26:25 UTC
This was fantastic. It's so good to see you writing.

Personally, I really like where the show took Castiel this season, and I'm highly anticipating the road yet (I still have my issues with S6, but bygones and all that).

A lot of people hated it, and say what they will, they can't claim it hasn't given fandom a lot to chew on. I'm not complaining if it's less than a week since 7.17 and already we're getting authors like yourself coming from the woodwork to speculate and providing awesome fic like this.

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yellow_pomelo April 14 2012, 00:58:02 UTC
It's good to be back. And yeah, I've had issues with S6 and S7, but it's got both low points and high points, though I've been obsessing over the low points, unfortunately. But 7.17 was just the episode to kick me back into gear.

:)

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dazedrose March 30 2012, 10:48:29 UTC
Please I beg you do more. This was so painfully stunning we must have more. It was bleak and then hope came in with the texts an then it was shattered at the end.... Just wow

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yellow_pomelo April 14 2012, 00:59:45 UTC
I doubt I'll be writing more in this vein since it's a coda, but you sure are tempting me! I am a sucker for comments like these.

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dimensionallyt March 30 2012, 13:34:59 UTC
In my head the coat was fake but the phone was real.

I will cling to this misguided belief and sing songs to drown out any lies telling me otherwise.

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yellow_pomelo April 14 2012, 01:00:32 UTC
Then I will sing with you, my friend ♥

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muffaletta March 30 2012, 13:49:01 UTC
So glad to see you posting fic again! I've missed your stories.

Terrific exploration of Cas' inner struggles. It's tricky to find that balance between the hallucinations as reality vs the hallucinations as a manifestation of one's mental state but I think you pulled it off beautifully! And I love the idea of Dean using the text messages as a way to reach out to Cas while also coming to terms with his own anger. Very nicely done....

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yellow_pomelo April 14 2012, 01:04:07 UTC
I'm happy to be coming back to you, my lovely!

Thank you for always reading my fic, it really makes me feel so much better. And I was actually uncertain of how Dean would text (like how much chat speak, etc), so it's good to see that the texting worked out well.

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