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Fic: Old Friend

Aug 02, 2011 17:03

Title: Old Friend
Author: yellow_pomelo
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Charles/Erik
Warnings: Character death.
Word Count: ~400
Disclaimer: I do not own X-men: First Class or any of it's characters.
Summary: Erik knows what death looks like.

Notes: For this Round 7 prompt at 1stclass_kink, asking for someone dying at the beach.

( He's seen it often enough; dealt it more than once. )

fic:xmfc, charles/erik

Comments 14

oncetherewasnot August 2 2011, 21:52:06 UTC

This is beautiful and powerful and yet somehow very gentle. And the use of the title in this context just about killed me.

Lovely ♥

yellow_pomelo August 4 2011, 22:22:01 UTC

Thank you, your words are pure gold to me :)

ginbitch August 2 2011, 22:24:36 UTC

GAH! That last line killed me.

Beautiful, lyrical writing.

yellow_pomelo August 4 2011, 22:23:57 UTC

Lol, thanks!

spfizz August 3 2011, 01:42:49 UTC

Oh, :(

Lovely use of metaphors.

yellow_pomelo August 4 2011, 22:24:31 UTC

Aw, sorry for making you sad, I guess, but thanks for reading ♥

sasha_b August 3 2011, 01:50:58 UTC

UMF omg.

All my cries, seriously. Gorgeous and the last line, it kills.

yellow_pomelo August 4 2011, 22:25:11 UTC

Thanks! There's nothing like killing the reader with the character

XD

rubynye August 4 2011, 14:34:31 UTC

Oh, this is heartbreakingly beautiful and beautifully heartbreaking!

yellow_pomelo August 4 2011, 22:26:06 UTC

Thank you :)