The World is Out There 2/4?

[yellow_craion]

Title: The World is Out There 2/4?

Author: yellow_craion

Disclaimer: It's called fan-fiction for a reason

Rating: heavy R

Words: 5 806 (this part) + 1 644 (first part)

Characters/Pairings: Bilbo, Kili, Fili, later: Bofur, Gandalf, Thorin, some OCs

Warnings: Aftermath of violence, gory imagery, slavery

Comments

[anonymous]

Yay!! I'm so happy you updated this!!! It's great to see a bit of Fili and Kili's POV and of course Bilbo is going to take good care of them! Hopefully soon they'll realize this :)

[yellow_craion]

Of course he is! And they will slowly understand he's not the enemy :)

Thank you :D

[anonymous]

One of my secret kinks, and it's so nice to see the comfort coming on right away.

Please post a note on the kinkmeme when you update!

[yellow_craion]

Hee, I'm happy you enjoyed it :D

Of course I will.

[anonymous]

Hello, I found this story when I was browsing through the hobbit kink!meme. I think it's brilliant - great writing, great characters, great plot (so far) - but there's not enough of it! Is there any chance that you will continue writing? Either way, thanks for an entertaining couple of chapters.

[yellow_craion]

Thank you! It means so much to still receive such lovely comments, after months. I'm slow, when it comes to writing, I'm soo sorry for that - I have another chapter partly written and the whole story planned out, with an ending and all (hell, I'm even tempted to do a little side story of how Dis and other separated family members are doing in that time) so... yeah, I'm not giving up on it. And comments like yours remind me to not give it up, so really, thank you!

[sharkseye]

Oh wow, what a fantastic story. I really hope this hasn't been abandoned. It's wonderfully written, and the characterizations with the situations they've each been through are spot-on. Fili and Kili are so sad though, I just want to wrap them up and give them food. Though I'm pretty sure Bilbo's going to do exactly that.
Thanks for writing what's been done so far, it's really lovely. I would absolutely love for it to be continued, and hope you do so! If not, thanks for this much, it was good to read too.