The World is Out There 1/4?

[yellow_craion]

Title: The World is Out There 1/4?

Author: yellow_craion

Disclaimer: It's called fan-fiction for a reason

Rating: heavy R

Words: 1 644 (this part)

Characters/Pairings: Bilbo, Kili, Fili, Bofur, Gandalf, Thorin, some OCs

Warnings: Violence, slavery (because I'm a cruel human being that enjoys watching little people being hurt)

Author's note: As suggested,

Comments

[yellow_craion]

Thank you, I'm delighted to hear that! :) Yeah, it's not gonna be easy but I think they'll make it home ;)

[jukkaluv]

Ohhh, how sad. Poor Bofur. Is he going to be saved, too? Please?
And poor Fili and kili, of course, but at least they end up with Bilbo.
Can't wait for more!

[yellow_craion]

Well.... I wouldn't want to spoil the fun - you'll see ;)
Yup, they have Bilbo and he'll take good care of them.
Working on it...

[angel1605]

Ohhh, interesting stuff! Poor Dwarves though :( I can't wait to read more - and I'm sure the next chapter will be of a more hopeful nature for some of my fav Dwarves ;)

[yellow_craion]

Thank you! So you're more of a Kili & Fili kinda gal? Good to know, may come in handy ;) And yup, a little bit more hopeful, but just as angsty.

*can't control my evil laugh anymore*

[angel1605]

Thorin is my fav, but I like Kili very much as well ;)

[anonymous]

This is a great start; I hope there is more, soon. And that Bofur is rescued!

[yellow_craion]

Thank you! There will be more, just not sure how soon :(

[tsubasafeathers]

I hope he gets Bofur back ;-;

[yellow_craion]

All in good time! Thank you for leaving a comment! :)