nectrarine

Feb 16, 2009 10:27


Title: Nectarine
Author: yellow_shuffle
Beta Reader/Editor: charlotte8888uk
Rating: NC-17
Band(s): alice nine
Pairings: ShouxHiroto XDD
Summary: Shou decides not to eat dinner and just skip to desert. What or who may this desert be?
Warnings:*Made By An Amateur| Smut|
Chapter: 1/1 *one shot
Tagline: "Promise what you can deliver and deliver more than you promised."
Synopsis: "What's the rush babe?" Shou asked as he smiled mischievously and stroked the others member at a low, tempting and eminently torturous pace as he tasted the syrup of the sweetened peach by trailing his forefinger in between Hiroto's legs and putting it into his mouth. "We have the whole night for us, right?"
Genre:Randomness| Fluff| Angst| Smut-like Situations|
Disclaimer: I gave Nao a jar of honey and he said: "Take me! I'm yours!" I don't own them.. but soon enough, I will.
Notes: There's a new community just founded about a week ago. It's called aliceinfiction and this one shot is what I'm gonna submit to the community regarding its prompt: peaches and stars XD

sequel of inattendu pêche




Shou took off his boxers in one motion and stared at his dessert's body, covered with sweetened peaches and sticky, sweet and addictive syrup. He chastely licked his lips as he drew his face down onto Hiroto's collar bone and nibbled the strip of orange-colored peach with his luscious lips. He seductively sucked in half of it, then brought his face up to his lover's, who was still blushing.

He then placed his thumb below Hiroto's pouty, sexy and sensuous lower lip as his remaining fingers cupped his lover's chin. He then, lightly pulled down Hiroto's jaw with his thumb and the other voluntarily opened his mouth.

Shou smirked at how Hiroto responded. Well, duh! They haven't done any of these "things" since Hiroto found out that his mum was hospitalised due to pneumonia. Hiroto would spend half of the day at practice, still worrying about his mum and then 5 hours at the hospital. He would only go home to eat, take a shower and sleep.

Then, Shou slid the peach to his lover's sweet and parted lips. With half of the peach on his mouth and the other half on Hiroto's mouth, they both started to suck the innocent peach, bringing their lips together. They then started to struggle for domination. The two of them sucked the
peach like crazy, sliding it in and out of their mouths, until Shou sucked the whole peach into his already watery mouth and grinned, crushing it into smaller sized pieces. Shou smiled and kissed Hiroto's mouth, transferring the peach from his to his lover's mouth. Then, he felt himself getting half hard.

Shou explored Hiroto's warm mouth filled with shattered pieces of the peach and let his tongue massage the other's mouth's cheeks. He then, traced his lover's upper set of teeth with his tongue, dragging the pieces of peach into his own mouth.

They continued kissing passionately as Shou's hands lingered down Hiroto's sweet, hot and sticky body. After sometime, Shou pressed his body to his lover's squashing the peaches and spreading it onto Hiroto's body. Shou parted his lips from Hiroto's as he felt something poking the side of his left leg. He then lifted his body slightly and looked over at the pair of bodies, covered with crushed peaches and orange-coloured syrup, trailing on their bodies and saw a silhouette of his lover's extra muscle, stiff, hard, covered with syrup which had a few drops of pre-cum that shone in the warm glow of the scented candles that filled the room.

Shou smirked as he moved his body down and as he did he said: "Sorry. I totally forgot about my main dessert." When he came face to face, ermm, or face to member with his lover's hard and throbbing cock, he smothered the sweetened muscle with lascivious kisses, from bottom to top and licked the pre-cum and heard a suppressed groan. Then he lightly tapped the slit on its head with his fore finger and looked at his lover, who moaned and looked back at him, with heavy clouds of steamy pleasure, unfulfilled temptation and devouring lust filling his eyes.

"Shou.. just please.. go on." Hiroto mumbled as his lover continued playing with his throbbing member.

"What's the rush, babe?" Shou asked as he smiled mischievously and stroked the other's member at a low, tempting and eminently torturous pace and tasted the syrup of the sweetened peach by trailing his forefinger in between Hiroto's legs and putting it into his mouth. "We have the whole night for us, right?"

"Must.. Go.. Back.. To.. Hospital." He cried between sensuous moans.

"I will see to that, that that won't happen." Shou said with a smirk as he lowered his face more and examined his lover's sweet tunnel, where the syrup of the peaches trickled slowly and seductively. He then, licked the syrup, teasing his lover as he did so. Hiroto tossed his head to the side and closed his eyes as Shou continued licking him.

It's not that Shou hasn't done this before, you know, licking his tunnel and stuff. It's just that, this time, it was so passionate, so seductive. Then he, felt a finger being inserted into his tunnel. He groaned and flinched. He could feel the finger entering him. After sometime, he felt another finger. He once again groaned, moaned and tossed his head from side to side as he felt his older lover's middle and forefinger, worming their way inside of his tight tunnel, turning, twisting and scissoring his muscles apart. He then, felt Shou sucking his whole manliness.

He reached out his hand to grab the other's brunette's mocha-coloured hair and clutched it as he felt himself starting to sweat. A notion of him, cherishing the feeling of Shou's mouth moving up and down as it sucked his member. Shou then moaned and produced vibrating sounds that emphasised the feeling for Hiroto. Hiroto's moans became more dissipated, tightening his grip. An indication that he was near to his climax.

Yes, treasure it as much as you can, Pon because soon enough, you won't be able to get up."
Shou thought as he finally opened his mouth and let his lover's member fully escape his ravishing lips.

Shou then smirked as he pulled his fingers out and noticed his lover flinch. He then, licked his digits and moved his body back up to face his lover.

"Tell me, Pon." Shou said as he brushed the other's hair that slightly covered his face, due to the sweat and too much head-tossing. "What do you want for Valentine's?"

Hiroto glared at his lover who produced a knowing smile at his striking face. "I want to fly as high as the stars that shine like your eyes." They then grinned at each other. Yes, Shou knew what his lover was talking about.

Shou grabbed Hiroto's tied wrists with one hand and the put the other on his back. To help his lover, Hiroto arched his back and positioned himself to sit atop of Shou's lap. Then, he felt Shou lifting his writs up and wrapping them around his neck. Hiroto, who's arms were now around his lover's neck, pressed his forehead against the other's and brushed his lips. Shou smiled.
"I can't fly you there, babe." Shou said as he parted his lips from Hiroto's and placed his hands at the other's hips and elevated them up. "But I can surely make you feel like you're there.." Shou said as he positioned his now hard member and slowly positioned Hiroto's hips and tunnel directly above it, for perfect penetration.

And perfect penetration, they had. Once Hiroto felt Shou's member inside of him, he closed his eyes and bit his lower lip, taking in the pain that would soon change into pleasure. Shou waited for his lover to give the signal to when to start moving. And so, when Hiroto opened his eyes, Shou started his slow and sumptuous rhythm, making his lover flinch and produce sexy, suppressed moans.

After sometime, Shou started to pick up the pace and thrust into his lover deeper, harder, stronger and faster. He then felt Hiroto's head fall onto his shoulder blades and his teeth seductively bite his flesh. He knew it, he must have hit his lover's sweet spot. Hiroto started to make wanton, erotic and lustful sounds as he continued clenching his teeth onto Shou's bare shoulder blades, creating red marks. Shou then kept the pace and also kept on hitting Hiroto's prostate every time he thrusted in. Subsequently, he heard Hiroto mumbling something like: "Can't. Do. It... Must Come.. Already.."

Shou smirked, he's not gonna let this happen, not on his watch. After 2 more thrusts, he himself came. Hiroto called out his name as the surge of hot, dense liquid filled his hole. Shou, feeling sorry for making his lover wait, started to stroke his lover's member, without sliding out of him. After a few strokes, Hiroto came, shooting his fluids onto his and Shou's bare chests.

"Go-Gomen..." Hiroto said as he titled his head back onto Shou's bruised shoulder blades and panted for air.

"No worries.. We'll just take a bath.." Shou then, lifted Hiroto up as the other wrapped his skinny legs around Shou's waist. Shou then got out of the bed and proceeded to the bathroom.

"What?! What do you mean you bought 20 cans?!" Shou's voice echoed in the bathroom as he placed his hands on his hips.

"Don't you like it?" Hiroto responded as he brought his forefinger to his lips and seductively bit it. "We can do what we did.. over.. and over.. and over... and over.. and over.. and over.. again."

"What the- Hey! What about your mother?" Shou asked as he wrapped the towel around his waist and wrapped the other around Hiroto's hips.

"Don't be silly, Shou!" Hiroto said with a smirk as he opened the bathroom door and went straight to the kitchen and peeked through the paper bag. "My father's in the hospital. He'll take care of Mum."

"But I thou-" Shou was cut off when Hiroto tossed him a bottle. "Soymilk?"

"We can fill the bathtub with that and peaches.." Hiroto said as he brought out 2 cans of sweetened peaches. "What do you think?"

Shou smirked at the lustful attitude that his lover his putting up. Oh well, better grab the opportunity while he still could.

"Fine. But definitely no more peaches when we do this, got that?"

"Yay~ Next time.. I think I'm gonna use assorted fruits in star-shaped, bite size pieces." Hiroto said as he went back into the bathroom skipping.

"Whatever." Shou said as he lifted the heavy paper bag full with tens of bottles of soymilk. "As long as I get what I want." He then, went into the bathroom and kicked the door shut.




yay~~ my first ever smut fic! yay, yay, yay~... I never thought that writing this would be so hard.. especially when you don't have any experiences and owed everything you know to other smut fanfics XDDD don't ask me why I still don't have any experience and don't plan to have any anytime soon... fine! .. it's because I'm still a minor! I'm still friggin' 14 years old! so please!!!! forgive my poor, uncoordinated and amateur smut fic!!!

and dang~ i missed school today.. see, last night, Sunday, when I finished writing this, i realized it was already 2 in the morning wow~

oh.. btw.. the title: nectarine.. means smooth peach.. like pon XD

anyway.. the whole fic is more attached to the whole peaches things.. and less on the stars XDD

so.. yeah~ leave comments and criticism XDD you can leave some smex, too~ so at least I can improve a bit with the whole smut and gore XD

alice nine, oneshot, shouxhiroto

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