Clubbing

Sep 14, 2011 21:47

TITLE: CLUBBING
PAIRING:  GDYB
RATING: PWP, NC-17
A/N: For ybaeviplove!!! I haven’t written smut in a long time so this one might not be so consistent ...

This is my smut version of the oneshot drunken dragon, a gift for all the wonderful stories and banner she has been making ^^

Sorry for the delay I just my internet connection back today... I hope you guys like ( Read more... )

fan fiction, gdyb, oneshots, nc-17

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yb_baby September 14 2011, 13:49:40 UTC
wah I just read it completely now... the middle nor the ending part had no relationship to the story or atleast the plot or feel i was planning on

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ybaeviplove September 14 2011, 15:36:14 UTC
Haha this was definitely HOT !!!!!!!

Haha actually I was hoping for a more more drunk Jiyong getting fucked by the sober Youngbae bit anyway this is freakinnngggggg hhhhoooottttttt!!!!

I missed your smit and DETAILS!!!!!! you should write again SMUT!!!!! :D :D haha xD

I liked the idea of doing it in the toilet... Omg... I can imagine it... So .. Hot!!! XD

And omg!!!!

I need a sequel to this xD

Hahaha xD you really have something foe Seungri right???? XD haha xD

Im glad u liked the banner!!! And thankuu for liking my fics!!!! ^^

This was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

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yb_baby September 15 2011, 05:55:19 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting..^^

really? I think i lost the connection with smut T.T

ahh details I think i can't live without them, it find it necessary for better imagination of the scene hahah damn I am such a perve..
ahh the toilet its because i ahvent written on in toilet thats why ^^

sequel??? hahha i need to make up for my rudeness to seungri maybe a smut with him in it hahaha

thanks again...

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ybaeviplove September 15 2011, 15:43:41 UTC
Hahaha,, smut is just smut xd ze need detailss!!!
ahahah XD

You should write one in public XD Sauna maybe???? O_O
OMG XD

Noooooooooooooooo! No Seungri!!!
Maybe Seungri loves YB, but sees YB doing GD OMG XD I want to read a fic about that xd ahahah xd

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italina_bella September 15 2011, 01:02:41 UTC
LOL!! I love your attention to detail!!

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yb_baby September 15 2011, 05:57:53 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting...

hehehe thanks I'm a perve for putting in so much attention to the details but I like it that way...
Glad you liked it..

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pancake_pancake September 15 2011, 18:02:28 UTC
Very well written - so haawwwt!! >////////////<

"...Jiyong licked his lips happily, he
was really wanted that big meaty
thing in his mouth..." >//////< my imagination is running wild...
"“Glad I decided to borrow
Seungri’s clothes today!”
Jiyong happily smiles." someone's gonna cry~ =p

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yb_baby September 16 2011, 13:18:43 UTC
kkkk~~~ thank you so much for reading and commenting...

hehehheheh thats why we need details ^^

uhmmmm what Seungri doesn't know wont hurt him...

thanks again//

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dans711 July 15 2012, 11:21:53 UTC
damn so hot, I can't breath *_*
love GDYB they are so hot together <3

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good batuocd91 February 28 2014, 03:41:00 UTC
this is good, keep trying my dear author

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