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[yatsuka]

There's just something wrong with me. I was trying to go to sleep last night, but I was plagued by these random thoughts and ideas...

And I supposed it's a miracle that I posted two days in a row. Usually, I can't be bothered to get off my lazy butt to do anything productive, but since I'm procrastinating at the moment, fanfiction comes a bit

Comments

[sciathan_file]

Wow. You are plying me with more Host Bu fic...this can't be good for my free time...

But that was lovely, as usual *swats plot bunnies away*

And I have no idea if Mori is OOC....because frankly I have no idea how he would behave in such a situation...but I think you've done a good job of approximating his reaction. Especially the image of him staring at his hands...that just works for him.

[yatsuka]

*picks up a mallet to help chase the bunnies* Leave me alone, dammit!

Wait... Which reminds me... http://bunny.frozenreality.co.uk/index.php?id=43 Go take a look, if you so dare. =D

And I just watched an episode of Ouran, when I looked around to see more bunnies hiding under my chair, waiting to sink their vicious claws into my head...

Gah! Maybe I should stop writing actual stories and just do short shots for the rest of my life...

[ahiru_duck]

Omg... this just happened to a friend of mine. This is depressing. Nice Job though.

[yatsuka]

Thank you for the comment, and I'm sorry to hear that. *hovers around, not knowing what to do*

[morbid_musings]

Wow. Seriously, earnestly wow. Excuse, if I come across as a strange person, but this fanfic is simply excellent. Albeit a saddening tale, it is quite original and well-written. You have managed to portray Mori, who is a pretty complex character, very well; throughout the story I felt his pain, shock and utter devastation

[yatsuka]

Excuse, if I come across as a strange person, but this fanfic is simply excellent.

Hahaha... No worries. I'm a strange enough person myself, and some of my RL friends can testify to that.

And wow... I don't think I've ever had someone say that to me. It makes me feel flattered, yet pressured to do better at the same time. ^__^;;;

Thank you!

[krissia]

i agree with morbid_musings. you have a way with words that shocked me at first. i actually feel into the story. good job and i hope to read more of your brillant work soon!

[yatsuka]

Thanks! Hopefully I'll be able to find the time to write some more in the near future.

[moon_lit_night]

Poor Hunny. Poor worrying!Mori :(
I agree with everyone else, that Mori would probably end up acting in someway similar. Anyone would be worried about someone they care about.
Good fic :)

[yatsuka]

Thank you for the comment! It is very much appreciated.