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[adachy]

who: adachi and yosuke
where: prison
when: post-sympathy crime
what: working on the assumption that sympathy crime will end with adachi's imprisonment and souji and yosuke have a moderately happy ending, yosuke gets the courage to confront adachi in prison, after souji has gone back home to city, and stand before him to tell him - to show him - the

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writing this furiously at 2am i need to sleep........ sorry if this sucks FDJLKFJD

[braveblades]

Yosuke stood in the lobby of the visiting center, looking obviously nervous despite the cheery faces around him. This wasn't a happy family reunion, after all, nor a meeting between close friends. Back in December, the thought of coming here would have even made him sick to his stomach -- but he knew it had to be done eventually, if only to give himself some closure on the whole situation

no it's good n__n

[adachy]

Adachi's resting in his cell when the burly guard lumbers up to the bars. He doesn't even bother to lift his head and see what we wants.

"Get dressed, Adachi," the guard growls. "You've got a visitor."

I don't want to see them, whoever it is, he thinks, and he rolls over in bed.

The guard sighs. "You got five minutes to clean your ass up and come down to the visitors' area."

After the guard leaves, Adachi reluctantly dresses himself in the only clothes he was allowed to keep from home - his white shirt and his dark pants, full of creases from not being used in months, smelling like his musty drawer of prison wear. Before he exits his room, he passes the mirror - and he almost doesn't look in it, but curiosity gets the better of him, and he stops to look at his face.

His eyes have always been this ugly, grayish-brown, almost like the color of dirt, but they always used to carry a glint within, whether it was one of false kindness or hateful deviance. They were ugly, but they weren't dull. And now they're dull. There's no light,

^___^;;; i am so slow.. also should i slide over to present tense (thinking)

[braveblades]

Yosuke sat on the far side of the room, shifting uncomfortably in the prison-grade seat as he kept his eyes downward, his hands balled into fists on his lap. His gaze flickered up to the door every few seconds, searching for a glimpse of the man he'd come to meet, but they went back down to his shoes just as soon after

Re: ^___^;;; i am so slow.. also should i slide over to present tense (thinking)

[adachy]

And there's that unmistakable mop of brown hair, the one he'd spend so many nights twisting in between his fingers while he rocked inside the kid, tearing him apart little by little for his own pleasure. Adachi's heart sinks further; he thought it wouldn't get any worse than Dojima coming, but this has shown him otherwise.

Hanamura's the last person Adachi expected to show up here. To give him a little credit, he'd finally stood up for himself in their final battle, but it was only mildly impressive. He could smell the kid's hesitation, the desire to shrink away and hide like a mouse in its cage. He could sense Yosuke's skin crawling in Adachi's presence, like he was in the room with doom and death itself. And still, to this day, it's almost an empowering feeling; he could find that spark of hatred that drove him through the year in Inaba and run with it again if he wanted.

But the guard leads him over to Yosuke's cubicle, and as Adachi sits down in front of him, he demands Yosuke's eye contact immediately. Don't drop it, Hanamura