Homecoming (Sakende Yaruze, Nakaya/Fuse)

Feb 14, 2007 17:08

Title: Homecoming
Fandom: Sakende Yaruze
Pairing: Nakaya/Fuse
Author: Pyren aka gryvon
Recipient: Lucy Schwarz aka ele5
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: Fuse finally returns to Japan.

Nakaya froze in the short hallway... )

valentine's challenge, sakende yaruze, pyren, recipient: lucy schwarz

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anonymous February 14 2007, 22:37:51 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ♥♥♥

I grinned all the way through.

I love the canonical feeling, and how everything seems perfectly possible. (That's actually one of the reasons I love this pairing, that there is a good chance of them getting together, and how natural they are.)

I liked Shino giving the sparekey for Fuse to use. Considering his reaction in the manga (volume two end, and three), and how it developed in volume four, it's very nice to see that.

I also love the idea of them both grinning madly, and Nakaya running through the corridors (he would totally do so) and changing in record time and just throwing his stuff in a bag (because he would do that, too). Fuse apologizing is a very nice touch, and so is him appearing to watch them train, and comment Nakaya (and Nakaya having done some exercises only for three weeks is too realistic :D).

So, thank you so much. ♥

Love,
Lucy Schwarz

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annakas August 31 2008, 00:57:14 UTC
Ohh I loved it. It was so sweet.
It was so fun to see how both of them couldn't stop smiling and just being happy and seeing each other again.

Fuse apologizing was a nice touch.

The last line was perfect ending for this fic.

annakas

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