Drabble: Like Animals

[yamx]

Rose pushes against his chest, shivering in the evening chill. “Jack, people are staring at us!”

“Let ‘em. The Doctor’ll be here to rescue us soon enough.” He slides his warm hand up her thigh, which is covered with goose flesh. “Want to keep warm till then?” He’s leering, but his eyes are gentle.

Rose blushes furiously. “Jack! This is not the

Comments

[canaana]

Fantastic! This is an example of what a drabble should be: An entire story in 100 words of deft prose. :)

Besides, it made me laugh. :)

[yamx]

Fantastic! This is an example of what a drabble should be: An entire story in 100 words of deft prose. :)

*blushes* Thank you! That's quite the compliment! :)

Besides, it made me laugh. :)
I'm glad to hear that! :)

[honorh]

Hey, might as well give the zoo-goers their money's worth . . .

"I had no idea Terran mating rituals were so, um, bendy."

[yamx]

LOL - with Jack in the mix, it'd be bound to be interesting...

[wiggiemomsi]

*SQUEEEEEEEEE!*

This is perfect, just perfect! HOW do you come up with your ideas? And that ending line is just perfect!

I guess this is what separates a real writer ... YOU ... from a humble reader ... ME!

*Happy Hugs*

[yamx]

LOL! So, do you like it then?

I have no idea where that came from, I was fretting how I was going to do the nudity thing when I suck at writing smut, and then it just came to me. *g*

I came up with the IDEA of them being in a zoo first, then I had to work out how to get that into the punchline.

*hugs back* I'm thrilled you like it, since it's all for you! :)

[quean_of_swords]

Best drabble ever. ^^

[yamx]

*beams* Thank you so much!

[wendymr]

I love this! It's not only hilarious, it's so totally Jack. Inappropriate sexual overtures, but underlaid by nothing but love and concern. This is why I love our Team TARDIS! :)

[yamx]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it and his character shines through. :)