Drabble: Too Close

[yamx]

Title: Too Close (1/1)
Characters: Eleven/Jack
Rating: All Ages
Spoilers/warnings: End of Time
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction; the characters are the property of the BBC and used here without permission. No money was made.
Summary: Jack's taking a long time to wake up…
A/N: Written for the Shadow Proclamation, who bid on me in the

Comments

[wendymr]

Aww, this is just what I wanted! Perhaps it'll make him take Jack's sacrifices less lightly in future.

And I'm assuming there'll be lots of making-up and getting-to-know-you-all-over-again loving in the next few days! *g*

[yamx]

That's a lot to hope for... *g*

Glad you like your drabble!

[trobadora]

AWWWWWWW. *sniffles*

Yay for the Doctor not getting to take Jack (or Jack's immortality) for granted here.

[yamx]

Yeah. It hurts a lot more when you have to *watch* it happen.

Though of course, he may have seen it in the Valiant - over and over again, for all we know. But in this 'verse, he didn't.

[silvermoon_06]

Awe, another beautiful little ficlet! This was also lovely, and brought more tears to my eyes. :D

I'm so glad when Jack finally came back to life, I guess because the radiation was so powerful, it took him longer.

Thanks again for this, I loved it very much. Both of the little ficlets were wonderful. :D I've saved them both to my memories. :D

[yamx]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed them so much. (Publishing three drabbles in one day is really unusually fast for me... and I'm almost done with a fourth!)

[ana_rpm]

Awww, that's great. I does seem to me that the Doctor takes Jack immortality a bit too much for granted, so it's nice to see him worry. :) As always, thanks for sharing.

[yamx]

You're welcome. Yes, he should have to watch the sacrifices Jack is willing to make at least sometimes.

Thanks for commenting!

[adafrog]

Very good, thanks.

[yamx]

Thank you!