Fic: First Kisses (1/1)

[yamx]

Title: First Kisses (1/1)
Beta: wendymr
Rating: Teen
Spoilers/warnings: DW: The Doctor Dances, TW: Adam
Characters: Nine, Jack, Rose
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction; the characters are the property of the BBC and used here without permission. No money was made.
Summary: How hugs became kisses.
A/N: Written for the help_haiti auction as an incentive fic

Comments

[firefly124]

Mmmm, lovely!

[yamx]

Thank you! :)

[honorh]

This is so sweet and lovely.

[yamx]

Aw, thanks! :)

[taffimai]

Oh, so sweet.

[yamx]

Thank you! :)

[wendymr]

I have to tell you again how utterly perfect this is. The incremental, subtle changes, so low-key that it barely registers with them, and yet their relationship is changing. This is exactly what I wanted to see as a prelude to Thy Willing Soul.

And I adored this line, as well as the image of the Doctor taking Jack's bottle away and kissing him:

Funny how little it can take to make one feel loved.

Beautifully done, with so much loving affection and a wonderfully deft touch. Thank you!

[yamx]

I have to tell you again how utterly perfect this is.
Yes, please do!
;)

I'm glad I managed to get across that the changes really sneak up on them - their relationship is changing, but so slowly and naturally they don't even notice. And I'm especially glad you liked the final scene and the closing line.

Thank you for commenting!

[dark_aegis]

aww, that was sweet. Well done, as always :) I love the nuances of the "drabbles", and the last line was perfect.

[yamx]

Thank you! I'm glad the last line hit the right note. :)