I loved the sensual desciption you made of Ichigo. It was short and well made. Like I said it was very sensual. "inflamed", "burned", fire... It was as if I could feel Starrk emotions.
Albeit short, it was still good. I'm still no Starrk/Ichi fan, but that doesn't stop me from liking almost everything from you anyway.
As we talked about your writing can get a bit heavy. This is not a bad thing, mind you, it just means that your writing is almost like a poem and the brain takes a little while to absorb everything. With drabbles from others I'm used to it being light and a breeze to go through, but you manage to squeeze so much information into such a tight space.
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It was short and well made.
Like I said it was very sensual.
"inflamed", "burned", fire... It was as if I could feel Starrk emotions.
well done!
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I'm really happy you "got burned". ^^
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I'm glad you could feel the fire ^^.
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Thank you!
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As we talked about your writing can get a bit heavy. This is not a bad thing, mind you, it just means that your writing is almost like a poem and the brain takes a little while to absorb everything. With drabbles from others I'm used to it being light and a breeze to go through, but you manage to squeeze so much information into such a tight space.
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Well, for my part, I'm not that happy with the fact that most of my stuff ends up shorter than 1000. It's frustrating most of the time.
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You just need to be a little more patient with putting up your work. There's nothing wrong with working on notes and the like for longer time.
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XD
I know, I know. I lack the patience.
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