Fic: Tangled

[yalublyutebya]

John isn’t entirely sure how this happened. It started with a windy day and lots of running about and he hadn’t really thought it would lead to this particular problem, never having had this particular issue himself. Sherlock’s hair - which has grown just a bit too long - is knotted. There are some nasty knots in the back and Sherlock is whining as

Comments

[mazarin221b]

I see nothing wrong with focusing on Sherlock's hair. Nothing at all. Very nicely done - I like the idea of John allowing his ministrations to relax him as well as Sherlock, which also helps his mind relax a bit as well, enough to let a little revelation pop through.

[yalublyutebya]

It is very nice hair, after all. :-D

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[c0ntrarywise]

I was going to say something like "that last paragraph!" but then I had to extend it to "those last three paragraphs!" but then that wasn't good enough either, because I loved every fucking moment of this. It's adorable, and I love the unravelling revelation, and I love where you chose to end it. Thanks so much for sharing :D

[yalublyutebya]

Wow. Thank you so much for your comments!

[stardust_made]

Ooh, very sensual. Love how understated this is, without any dramatic turns, yet really charged. Random favourite line: "“This is so girly,” John says because, well it is, and it makes him feel better."
Oh, John.:)

[yalublyutebya]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

[yalublyutebya]

I predict fluff! ;-)

[mizg]

Do you only predict the fluff or do you plan to write said fluff? The style here is sensual (I don't inherently mean erotic, just sensual) and I'd love to see the follow-up fluff.

[chironstar]

Will we have sequel? *hopeful*

[jemariel]

Purrrrrrrrr... head massages and hair-playing are two of my favorite things. <3 <3 <3