Comments | yakuzagrl: A little story O' mine

yakuzagrl

A little story O' mine

Apr 10, 2009 15:51

So after talkin with Mallorie (think I spelled that right?) I decided to post up a short story I did once when I was in my last year of high school. It's funny cuz I wrote this a few sentances at a time in my keyboarding class that I had to take for stupid "practical" arts credits. By the end of that class I had this finished story and I really ( Read more... )

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vanilla_lilly April 11 2009, 04:41:24 UTC

nice story.....sad that he died, but nice.

yakuzagrl April 11 2009, 06:01:59 UTC

I had some people tell me I should a continuation of this.......but I like it as is. Plus I tried and got crap!!! Need to be back in keyboarding class to get a good story out ( ^ _ ^ )

vanilla_lilly April 11 2009, 06:56:31 UTC

Haha well I mean yeah you could do continuation of the story or another part about that guy and the drink....But I like it as is. You don't want to be like Disney ya know?

As for an inspirational place you might want to find a new one.... I don't think that school offers keyboarding anymore.......XD

mallorilaine April 14 2009, 17:43:27 UTC

wow that was very sad! Very good writting :) the story wa very good and very dramatic! hehe quite depressing though. You should post your other ones sometime!