[Meteors] Chapter 13

Jul 09, 2017 20:52

Chapter: 13

Pairings: YooMin

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance, Fluff, slight Angst

Summary:

There is only one truth, Changmin believes, and only one question - is it the one you want?
There is only chance, Yoochun thinks - the meteor crashes, or it doesn’t. And if it does the only question is, will you run fast enough or let the stars collide?

Of facts and red roses. )

tvxq, meteors, yoomin, fanfic

Leave a comment

Comments 8

shinchul303 July 10 2017, 03:33:22 UTC
I want to sit down and comment on every section here!

But I'm just back from a trip and have to parcel my time.

But I can dwell on this:

“You have to smile” [Yoochun] says very softly, his voice blending in the night and cold wind, “no matter what…”

Not the first time he's told Changmin this.

Reply

yakuso5u July 13 2017, 09:39:32 UTC
Hope you had a good trip!

Changmin's smile has been the trigger of many unforeseen consequences as far as Yoochun is concerned... ;-) And it's not the last time too!

Thank you for your comment here (and onto the next one)

Reply


keyhun July 10 2017, 05:11:54 UTC
hiiiii i'm sorry i haven't been leaving comments on the last couple of chapters i just haven't gotten a chance to sit down and read fic properly the past couple of weeks but i'm here now.

ugh what a lovely chapter. that moment where changmin asks if yoochun still loves him and yoochun simply says "i do" honestly got me so good. my heart!! my yoomin heart ;_; and omg, changmin starting to realize he likes men lskjdflkajd we're almost there!!! it's going to be so epic i can already taste it.

i really have to thank you for writing such amazing yoomin fic...honestly, yoomin is my otp on par with yunjae but there's so much yunjae out there and never enough yoomin. it's such a struggle to find yoomin content and it's really easy to feel like the memory of the two of them together is fading from fandom because the amount of ppl who cared about their ship was so few. so ppl like you who write such amazing yoomin fic keep me going on this lonely ship ♥♥♥ i love them to bits and i never want to forget them or let them go ;_;

Reply

yakuso5u July 13 2017, 09:44:25 UTC
hiiiiiii you! omg don't apology, I know how it is... I hope you finally have more time and can relax a bit ;-)

How creepy does that sound if I say that I was all giddy when I wrote the "I do" part AHAHAHAHA fantasies coming to life! I was cheering for Chun in my own mind like "SAY YOU DO" and yeah. I'm the writer. Such a weird person. XD

And awww dear ♥ I totally get how you feel :/ I'm awfully biased toward all Min couples (except MinSu maybe) and nowadays HoMin is flooding the place... which is nice but I miss my glorious JaeMin and YooMin has always been a rare treat, as you say >< Thank YOU for enjoying them as a reader + being a YooMin writer too, we need to keep the flame alive LMAO *fired up* Thank you so so much for your comment, till next chapter! ♥♥♥

Reply


shoyukotoo July 11 2017, 03:48:13 UTC
Ooh, I really liked this chapter, even though it was a bit sad ;; but the YooMin is blooming a little ❤️
Loved how Changmin was thinking all the time about the lips of every man, trying to get the answer that it seems he already knows huhu because it was something he didn't tough in like his entire life (like, stop over thinking it and kiss those lips already, maaan).

And, as always, loving your way of writing.

Reply

yakuso5u July 13 2017, 09:49:49 UTC
YooMin is finally sort of happening, aren't they?? *grins*
Changmin is such a frustrating person I know, but do we really want that selfish brat to be any other way (Yoochun says YES but I'm not sure he's entirely ready himself for Min making kissy lips at him LMAO)

Thanks for reading and comment! I'm glad you enjoyed that update :)

Reply


shinchul303 July 11 2017, 23:47:08 UTC
SO much more I could say, but I'll settle for this ( ... )

Reply

yakuso5u July 13 2017, 10:05:29 UTC
That may be an arrogant thing to say but I really love how this part turned out and I'm so glad you liked it :)

The meteors metaphor is not so easy to outline (and the summary is quite cryptic - which is bad, I know) but the idea of it stuck... because YooMin relationship is so "down to earth" (Yoochun's daydreams aside) I wanted that element of poetry somehow, to give their bond a different dimension - beyond the everyday feelings, a larger and deeper meaning. Anyway. Rambling XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :')

Reply


Leave a comment

Up