Saudade (Across from you) [Chapter 4]

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 4/9(?)

Pairings: YooMin, HoMin (bff), Changmin centric.

Rating: G (warning!: bandfic, includes lawsuit)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Summary: Saudade, it is all that is left of you. How many times I pulled you up, like all the times you pulled me up. Everything we've shared. Now you are gone, and I don’t have a word to express my feelings; it

Comments

[gompi]

i liked this chapter alot .... yeah :D

[yakuso5u]

Yeaaaah!!~ XD *high-5*

[n3uromanc3r]

I really liked this chapter, Yunho's characterization was so real and so enjoyable from this point of view!

The way Changmin compared the past, where their three band mates joined efforts were enough to pull Yunho back to the earth when his ideas went too far from realistic, and the bitter present with him alone trying to achieve the same goal with his own poor methods which are usually arguments and fights or sulking until one of them finally gives in.

And the memory of them after winning that award and tired Changmin falling asleep on Yoochun's shoulder was so sweet and lovely! All those warm feelings and the security Yoochun's presence and the hand holding arouse in Changmin were so touching!
But Jaejoong's warning about not to take advantage to Changmin's state made me really curious whether it really was just a harmless joke or Yoochun had a crush on Changmin and Jae noticed it, or Yoochun talked about it with his best friend...

Thank you for this wonderful chapter, I really enjoyed it!

[yakuso5u]

Giving Yunho flaws is very hard, you know XD But I remembered how he often thanked Min saying that even though he sets his expectations for him very high, Min always does his best... ^^;
(aaaaaah it's hard to work on the real life thing ;__;)

SoulMates in action!! I'll let you decide what you want Jae to mean by that, but it was definitely more than a harmless joke - though it was meant to sound as one ;-)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! More to come (with more YooMin) in the next chapter~ ^^/ Thank you as usual for commenting ♥

[silentdyn]

Love love love this chapter! You've written the emotions and characterisation really well, as always :) The dynamics between Homin are very interesting. I like how the story has developed as an exploration of feelings both past and present rather than purely plot driven. Still, I wonder if you intend for the five of them to meet/reconcile and for blatant Yoomin to eventually happen hehe. Any hints? :D

[yakuso5u]

Rather than plot, I'd say all the drama is happening in their heads? XD

There will be more blatant YooMin, that I can promise! As for the rest, for now I want to make it as something that could be happening irl so I'm not planning for a reconciliation (better warn you beforehand ^^); maybe later if I can come up with a good idea for a sequel...? :)

Glad you liked this! Thanks for commenting~ ;-)