Different

[yaisa_forehba]

Title: "Different"
Author: Me
Rating: NC-17
Genre: angst, smut, romance
Pairing: JongHo
Disclaimer: unfortunately don't own them.
Summary: Are "different" people allowed to find happiness? (Still suck at that)

Comments

[yaisa_forehba]

SPOT! yesungholic thanks sweetie <3

[yaisa_forehba]

SPOT! kurokitsune09 cuz she deserved it! <3

[kurokitsune09]

Yay!Yay!Yay!Yay! Spot for me!!! <333333

zomg!!! Jonghyun was beaten up!! But at Minho saves the day!! (cackles and glomps the two of them) A little bit of odd tense changes but it's fine bb. ^^

*cries* the smut was short unnie. it should be longer. *nods*

[yaisa_forehba]

Yeah he was...*hates herself, cries* T^T I'm sorry Jjoooong~

You mean the tense in my grammer? I know...hahaha xD sorry...that's my weak point in englisch xD and I have no beta an ugh..xD

*cries with you* I know right?! But ..I was so embarrassed to write it..xD it's my first time and it's awkward and I don't like it!

*Hug*

[yaisa_forehba]

I actually wrote "englisch" <--german..sorry..xD it should be "english"

[yaisa_forehba]

SPOT! crazyoverbishie cuz I promised.

[crazyoverbishie]

well..thk you...^^
i almost make a new reply...then i saw this^^

you know the '-----------------' making me think of some hidden story...^^

this is good...the smut is not crappy...i like its length too...i cant imagine if it ever be longer than this,,,,its not like i mind reading longer pieces...but i dont know if i will like it more than now...^^

like it really^^
surry i couldnt give you any concrit...>.<...my english fail me...^^

pls do write more...ill be waiting for more pieces from you^^

[yaisa_forehba]

I said I would spot for you. Hehe

Haha, really?? It was just to cut the parts. hehe cuz they switch the time.

You think so? Thanks!
Well, I'm still new to writing and maybe smut was a level too high for me, but I wanted to try and oh well^^.

My english isn't any better! *sigh*

hehe I'll try, thanks for reading and commenting <3

[crazyoverbishie]

thk you^^

i know that...i just love to imagine if there were a scene...XD

yeah i think so^^
just keep writing more^^

you're welcome^^

[shan_ah_non]

OMG. Major eww if Jonghyun did get a mouth piercing.

Though this was HOT. 8D

[yaisa_forehba]

Haha.. thanks xD

Well, I was just fed up with some ignorant people. Cuz..humans with piercings are humans too you know xD

[yaisa_forehba]

Jjong would be able to pull off anything! haha I love him :3

Awwww. Thanks bb! I'll try my best!! <3