Comments | yahola: Fic: Unquenchable 1/5

yahola

Fic: Unquenchable 1/5

Nov 23, 2008 16:25

Fandom: CSI: Miami
Title: Unquenchable
Author: Yahola
Spoilers: Kill Switch
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Horatio/Ryan (slash)
Summary: Horatio has an eye-opening revelation, faces temptation and fights some character flaws until he comes up with a plan.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters...
Author’s Note: Thanks to octobertwelfth, who betaed this :)

Chapter One

( Alexx caught up with Horatio in front of the MDPD Crime lab, right after he had parked the Hummer. )

csi: miami, fanfic, ryan/horatio

Comments 12

jess_caine November 23 2008, 16:34:09 UTC

Interesting start. So Alexx found out a lot quicker than Horatio, hehe. No wonder since she's the perfect mother hen.
Patiently waiting for more.

yahola November 26 2008, 18:58:34 UTC

Mother hen sure fits her :)

Yes, on we go...

I'm still getting a feel for the characters and well, back into writing, but the story will get finished :)

murgy31 November 23 2008, 20:13:57 UTC

That was a great start! I can't wait for more!

yahola November 26 2008, 18:59:22 UTC

Thank you :)

abbeydale November 23 2008, 23:04:42 UTC

Mmmm, great start :) I love how Alexx cottoned on way before Horatio. Woman's instinct? ;D Looking forward to more.

yahola November 26 2008, 19:00:32 UTC

Sometimes, even Horatio has to be blind ;)

Cute! gatekeeper1324 November 24 2008, 19:36:45 UTC

Liked the start I do wish there was more Horatio/Wolfe stuff here!

Thanks!

Speak to you again later!

Re: Cute! yahola November 26 2008, 19:03:23 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

I wish thre was genereally more fic centered on Horatio and Ryan..either slash or gen, with focus on their working relationship etc.

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yahola November 28 2008, 19:50:16 UTC

Thank you :)

H is just usually so closed off about his feelings - at least with words, I couldn't help to try to get in his head...