Consider it Enrichment

Apr 07, 2010 12:10

AN: Look! another short White Collar fic. Short seems to be all my brain is willing to process at the moment. I'm not sure how this story turned out, but I'll share it all the same, if it brings a smile, then my work here is done.

Note: Numbers given in regards to New York are nothing more than slightly educated guesses.

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chayaasi April 7 2010, 16:38:57 UTC
*giggles* I'd say this fic came out very well and I love that it shows Neal's occasional bouts of insanity that's not insanity. Although I don't know what is more insane--making a trip to 35 banks or provoking Peter.
Nice work!!

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yacoba April 7 2010, 16:46:02 UTC
Thanks so much ^_~

I think part of the reason I ended it where I did was so I wouldn't have to deal with which was more insane ^_^ in a situation like that I'm not sure who I'd feel more sorry for.

Thanks again!

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ameryanne April 7 2010, 17:07:52 UTC
Yay smiles. :)

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yacoba April 7 2010, 17:15:17 UTC
huzzah! I'm glad you enjoyed this ^_^

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asimaiyat April 7 2010, 17:24:12 UTC
Ha! Very funny and cute, and very Neal and Peter. I lol'd at the variety of synonyms for "plotting" they came up with.

I totally know what you mean about feeling stuck writing lots of short ficlets -- I'm in the same boat, and I'm chalking it up to spring fever. :) but a friendly word of advice -- when you post fic to a community, don't put yourself down! It tends to make people more inclined to read in a negative way, because they're looking for what you didn't like about it -- when actually I think this ficlet turned out well. It can be hard to stand behind your work, of course, even when it's good; I have a bad habit of apologizing for papers when I turn them in. :-/

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yacoba April 7 2010, 17:43:39 UTC
Thanks for reviewing! Glad to hear you enjoyed the story.

I can see your point, though I've never thought twice about criticizing my [am my own worst critic] ^_~

Thanks again!

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nevcolleil April 7 2010, 17:54:23 UTC
Very cute :D

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yacoba April 7 2010, 17:56:54 UTC
thank you! I really appreciate that!

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kehlana_miyu April 7 2010, 20:25:35 UTC
It's so nice to find a fic that keeps our guys so much in character. I could easily imagine seeing this conversation in one of the episodes. It's exactly the kind of mischief with possible additional angle that Neal likes to get involved it, and Peter's reaction is spot on :) Hope you will write more!

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yacoba April 7 2010, 20:32:38 UTC
Thank you so much! It's a huge relief to hear that both Peter and Neal are in character, I'm always concerned about that sort of thing when I start writing for a new fandom.

Thanks again!

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