The Question of Guns

Mar 20, 2010 20:21

Author's Note: *gasp* it's been more than half a year and I've finally written something. First White Collar story, simply the first answer that popped into my head as to why Neal dislikes guns.

Title: The Question of Guns
Show: White Collar
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal Caffrey, Peter Burke, Jones
Genre: Gen
Spoilers/Warnings: None
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lonetread March 21 2010, 01:22:24 UTC
Heh, this is terrific. Neal's reasoning seems plausible and IC. And I lol'd at "crooked and a mile wide". :D Well done.

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yacoba March 21 2010, 01:24:13 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it ^_^

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trystings March 21 2010, 12:14:08 UTC
Their voices are pretty much perfect! Great story!

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yacoba March 21 2010, 12:15:28 UTC
Thanks! That was a real concern for me, always is the first time I write for a new show.

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photoash March 21 2010, 19:02:24 UTC
I liked the ambiguity! Neal is nothing if not slippery when he has something he doesn't want to divulge! :)

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yacoba March 21 2010, 19:10:21 UTC
So true, especially when he can't see what all the fuss is about, besides that isn't it just more fun leaving people to wonder?

Thanks for reviewing!

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photoash March 21 2010, 19:12:17 UTC
:) I think getting info out of Neal that Neal doesn't want to share would be quite difficult if not impossible unless someone was willing to go right on into coercion! :) thank you for writing!

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yacoba March 22 2010, 12:59:19 UTC
Thank you! Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this.

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Re: aww - I like it yacoba April 7 2010, 21:05:15 UTC
Thanks for the review! I didn't intend for Neal's response to be a sidestep, but the voicing of a thought that had occurred to me while browsing through the stories for White Collar. ^_~ I prefer the idea that Neal avoids guns 'cause there's no skill in using them.

It's my hope though that at some point the show will give us a definitive answer one way or the other.

umm the size of the text I use is the default, I've never actually tried to make it larger or smaller. Have you tried using Ctrl+ to enlarge everything?

Thanks again for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it ^_^

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