MFL: Chapter Three

[yatsuiko_chan]

Title: My Fair Lady
Chapter: Chapter Three: The Family Members
Pairing/s: Daiki x Umika
Genre: AU
Summary: With a new name, and a new environment to adapt to, Miyamoto Umi is all set to meet everyone in the "Family".
Note:
* No manip, just a character chart at the end.
* This = Monster Fic.

Comments

[nightbaron079]

WAIT FIRST COMMENT AND I SEE THE CHARACTER CHART 8Db

[yatsuiko_chan]

The character chart is so shiny, isn't it *o*
(LOOK AT OHNO LOOK AT HOW HANDSOME HE IS)

[nightbaron079]

PRETTY EVERYONE♥~
(HI OHNO HOW GLORIOUS YOU ARE)

[nightbaron079]

SO COOL EVERYONE AND EVERYTHING. THIS WAS A GOOD CHAPTER. I'LL COMMENT PROPERLY WHEN I GET BACK ENOUGH BRAIN CELLS FOR COHERENCY.

[yatsuiko_chan]

THANK YOU o/
Will wait for your comment (hopefully something with quotes)!

[nightbaron079]

DONE WITH THE QUOTES. SORRY IF I AM SO INCOHERENT PAPER IS EATING MY BRAIN CELLS.

[nightbaron079]

Hana then stared at his brother, puppy eyes and all. "Don't be stingy, please?"

Chuckling a bit, Daiki shook his head. "I wouldn't be stingy, but I think Umi-chan would be happier with home-cooked food. You can even teach her how to."

"Ooh~" Eyes widening in excitement, Hana went over to Umi's side and hugged her arm. "I finally have a big sister I can cook with~" SO KYOT.

"You have your own chef?" Hana asked curiously. "Did you have a butler for your own?" LOL somebody has been reading a lot of shoujo manga xD

She patted Hana's head tentatively, while saying "Of course. You will be my imouto."

Daiki smiled to himself, eyes changing into a more tender expression. "Now, let's eat!" I dunno, Hana seems taller when I think about it? xD AND AWWWWWW DAIKI DON'T DO THAT I'M MELTING AT ALL YOUR CUTE.

OH MY GOD OHNO AND YUKA MARRIED CAN I DIE A HAPPY DEATH OMG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH♥~ (REMEMBERS EMBARRASSED OHNO IN THAT HNA SEGMENT AAAAAAAAAAAH ALLMY KYUN KYUN FEELS AAAAAAAAAAAAH)

"I'm NOT dangerous. Nor am I gay. I'm bi, but that's besides

[yatsuiko_chan]

ISN'T HANA THE CUTEST?!

rofl one of these days, we'll see Hana mentioning manga titles for the lulz of it

Noooo~ Hana is small and cute *_* (Since she's Hiroro bby) Daiki and his loving looks <3 /melts

THIS IS ONE OF THE REASONS WHY I JUST HAD TO BRING RIIDA IN /biased. asdfghjkl; Imagine jealous Ohno protecting Yukaaaaa~ Huhu so beautiful!

Wahaha I was thinking that! He should fall in love with a guy from the other side<3 Is that Hikaru suggestion a request? Because I will make it happen if it is *o*

Heehee. We'll see siblings-like moments between the two for sure XD I'm biased like that. AND NO IROH WILL NOT FALL IN LOVE WITH FALCON! Falcon has a fiancee ~o~

Hornet and Falcon are like brothers /gets all kilig randomly. KamiShi was requested by Jas eh :3 It's fun~

Hideo is so precious~! Huhu I'm torn between him and Daiki because Umika is shippable with everyone ;_; NOOO RYO WILL NOT GO NEAR YUKA. B-but maybe there's some history...............

Kawashima papa is a bad person T~T

Thanks for the comment! <3 lol ganbatte sa

[nightbaron079]

YAY MANGA! HAHA CROSSOVER MENTIONS ARE THE BEST XDDD

OOOOH I WAS RIGHT IT /WAS/ HIRORO AND AWW DAIKI-NIICHAN<333~

UGH BEAUTIFUL SCENES AWAIT. OHNO/YUKA. THIS FIC WILL BE PERFECT.

I remember your plot about two years back and it was something like this though without DaiUmi pa. I can see how this is a monster fic.

YAY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BECAUSE NOBODY WRITES HIKAINOO THESE DAYS ANYMORE MY SHIPPER HEART IS DRYING UP TAT

Heehee YAY xD WHY NOT JUST A CRUSH THEN or something like "I like you before Falcon, when you weren't this antisocial" "Look who's talking, scholar. We used to talk, you know." AND OOOOOOOOOH DARE DESU KA WILL SHE BE WHO I THINK SHE IS 8Dbbbbbbb

[yatsuiko_chan]

lol I want to make Hana the type of girl who mentions pop cultures and stuff and Umi would be all "What? Who?" "Don't you know the Johnny's Juniors?!" HAHAHA.

This fic is basically majority of my one shot ideas placed in one XD But I still have that Naruse/Chinen/Hornet fic, which is more monstrous *o*

YEEEES! I SHALL. Convenient since the first job is drug related anyway! We could have Hikaru flirting with random girls at first before Inoo flirts with him :3

NOOO. Falcon's love life is absolute ~o~ It's full of drama

It's basically since her picture looks so mature :p It fits her somehow XD I SO WANT TO WRITE RANDOM HORNET x FALCON SCENES BECAUSE THEY'RE PRECIOUS

omg I just came up with the back story and OMG ALL THE DRAMA IN THIS FIC. Ryo ~_~ I'm not sure about what I feel about him anymore after adding Yuka into the equation.

SO WHAT IF HE'S REALLY A GOOD PERSON? ...nah, I doubt I can work around that. haha.

Ako inaantok na lang /sleeps

[talktoyourpet]

I LOVE THIS!
sorry, I was so excited to read the this chap so I didn't comment on chap 2. gomen! XP
Ano, I really love the plot of this story. Especially Kei's role. (laugh) It's like having a normal harmless person in the midst of the dangerous underground gang. XD

Good work on this and do update soon~ ^^

[yatsuiko_chan]

I'M GLAD YOU LOVE IT<3
Awww it's okay~ As long as I know people are reading, I'm happy ^^
Thanks :D Inoo's role is my favorite for various reasons haha. Such a refreshing character~

I'll try! Thanks!

[talktoyourpet]

Agree! :D The concept of Inoo's role is rather fresh since you don't see skilled gang members studying diligently plus being so... friendly/childish/a flirt. XD

THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS WORKING SO HARD!