Comments | yabulala: Bloody Monday~

yabulala

Bloody Monday~

Jul 11, 2009 03:06

Title: Bloody Monday

Author: lala-chan a.k.a yabu_lala^^

Pairing: Yabu Kota x Inoo Kei

Genre: PG

Summary: Inoo-chan's foot is bleeding~^^

'Ring...! ring!..ring!'',Inoo-chan cellphone ring again.He wake up.''moshi..moshi...ne! Yabu-kun!! don't bothering me! I'm wanna sleep!'',said Inoo-chan.Yabu-kun on the line,he answering."Inoo-chan!!! wake up! now ( Read more... )

yabu kota, fanfics, inoo kei

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pastelcupcake July 11 2009, 20:21:54 UTC

do you want me to help with the grammar? this just caught my attention because it is tittled as bloody monday! LOL im thinking the story would be like the drama bloody monday XD and of course its INOOBU!!! yay! XD

yabulala July 12 2009, 09:41:40 UTC

hahaha..I like create the title that make people..shock ne..hahaha ..gomen if the title not good & my grammar broken~ sorry!

pastelcupcake July 12 2009, 09:44:06 UTC

oh no problem just wanted to help people^^ i dont mean anything mean.

yabulala July 12 2009, 09:46:00 UTC

ic...now..gomen again..if my english broken..~

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amamae July 12 2009, 06:43:19 UTC

???????
lol

yo!MU's supporter?are you?
I'm milanisti
same as yabu^^

yabulala July 12 2009, 09:44:51 UTC

hahaha..yea! MU supporter haha...how do you know?

suteii July 14 2009, 03:16:06 UTC

it was very good, but the grammar could use some work...it's alright though.

yabulala July 14 2009, 10:40:56 UTC

gomen ne~ if my grammar not good~ actually...this is my 1st fanfic~

suteii July 14 2009, 16:43:45 UTC

it's all good...i suggest getting someone to fix your grammar for you....for it being your first story it's really good...don't get me wrong

yabulala July 15 2009, 10:22:18 UTC

yea..u right..thnx..

Ohayo LaLa-chan..!! mikansophia October 21 2009, 12:28:48 UTC

Just finished reading your fanfic... I like it.. Just that there are so many wrong grammars..
Anyways, hope you continue making stories... That's a gift you know... I'm also making stories but i never finished a thing.. I have so many stories that I have started and none of them were finished. In the middle of my writing session, i kept on being focused to another thing.. So it all become a pending stories... haha.. that's just me...
Don't worry about the comments we make about your grammar.. Though we can help you if you want.. =) Hope we could be good friends..
well, Anyways, Keep it up..!!! Ganbatte LaLa-chan!!!=)

Re: Ohayo LaLa-chan..!! yabulala October 30 2009, 09:48:09 UTC

yo!~ hehehe..thnx for judged me..ahh..gomen ne...if my grammars..broken...* i'm stupid!* gomen ne...ahh..anyways...I'm really appreciated that u read my fanfic..arigatou ne~

Re: Ohayo LaLa-chan..!! mikansophia October 31 2009, 07:18:42 UTC

no no no.. don't think that you're stupid.. that's bad yah know.. You should try making more..so I have something to read..
anyways, it's just the grammar..we're just humans who are not perfect.. so there are always mistakes that we could commit.. but at least.. we tried.. so.. therefore, we can always work it out, ne..?=)I like your imagination.. shing shing!! Ganbatte LaLa-chan!!!
Please make more...

Re: Ohayo LaLa-chan..!! yabulala November 1 2009, 14:44:49 UTC

yea..u rite~ ^^...I will make mor *if god wills it~ ^^..
actually..I already finished another fanfic..hehehehe *keito x daiki pairing!~ hehehehe

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