Comments | yaboiksar: Sex, Music and Lies Chapter 7

yaboiksar

Sex, Music and Lies Chapter 7

Feb 25, 2009 13:01

That's right, it's here. You aren't reading that wrong. Sorry updates for stories have been slow but unfortunately that will be the norm. I hope you guys like this one. It doesn't have some stuff I orignially thought it would. Call this the calm before the storm.

NC-17

Song the band played at the VH1 Honors concert (the one on the T.V.).
Song ( Read more... )

tony/michelle, au, sml

Comments 12

etamne February 25 2009, 18:31:31 UTC

Here's how it went:
1. I looked at my friends page.
2. I saw you updated S,M and L.
3. I died. For 3 minutes and 27 seconds.
4. I came back from the dead to read the chapter.
5. I died again due to hotness overload.

That. Was. So. Hot.
Guh. *whimpers and dies...again*

yaboiksar February 25 2009, 18:57:48 UTC

Dying is not an option.

I'm very glad you liked it because I was afraid it was jumping too much and didn't flow right.

I tried to do a more *emotional* sex scene this time. Not that the others weren't, but dropping the L bomb needed something, different.

Glad it worked out.

astrum_presul February 25 2009, 18:41:27 UTC

Omg, aww. I don't know where to start! 'Cause 'cause they said it! And it was of the amazing, but now you know it's all gonna hit the fan 'cause they're happy.

*flail*

yaboiksar February 25 2009, 18:59:55 UTC

They get one more chapter before it hits the fan. So you guys better enjoy it while it lasts!

It will end well though. Have faith!

And I can't believe I got a flail. So that's one death and a flail. Shit, I'm not *that* good people.

bookworm0503 February 25 2009, 21:35:41 UTC

Guh. I'm still reeling. You already know what I think...but:

When she like... forced him to look at her and then said it and he told her to say it again I think I may have lost consciousness for a brief moment because just ughhhhhhhhh. Lovelovelovelove. (See? I cant' even form real sentences now.) And I love how he actually said it, - even with whatever happened with Rachel that we still don't know about - it wasn't a slip of the tongue or something. He *meant* to say it. Again. Guh.

They're just so fucking cuuuutttteeeee. Especially at the end. They should just stay like that at all times.

And it was hot. Duh. It's always hot, but I think it was the adorableness that really resonated in this chapter. I repeat: So. Fucking. Cute.

So yeah. In conclusion: :D

yaboiksar February 25 2009, 22:07:27 UTC

*BIG HUG FREAKIN' GRIN*

I love that you love it.

jimkeller24 February 26 2009, 00:10:09 UTC

*dies*

[...insert silent clock here...]

*pulls a Tony and rises from the dead*

You can count another casualty of this chapter - so damn hot. And now I'm gonna put it on my iPod so I can read it in uni tomorrow.

yaboiksar February 26 2009, 00:51:45 UTC

Holy crap! Someone is porting my work around? THAT'S AWESOME!

So glad you liked it man!

tiah15 February 28 2009, 16:07:26 UTC

*gapes*

*still gaping*

*nearly chokes on a fly and closes mouth*

They said it ! Both fully conscious, sober, looking at each other, yes !!! And it was a beautiful moment (although that means peace won't last much lonnger)

I love the Bryan Adams song. It fits so well into this story and Tony's character.

A wedding band ? Uh oh ... it gets more and more intriguing. *bites nails*

Another hot love scene. The fogged up glas was a cool idea :)

I love this story so much it's not even funny anymore. I'll have to go back to re-read until you can update again.

yaboiksar February 28 2009, 21:48:48 UTC

Yay! So glad you like it!

I'm glad that you guys think the music I'm picking actually works with the story. Believe it or not I do a lot of research on what tunes to use and it's a little nerve wracking.

I hope to get back into the groove of things. February wasn't a good month.