Yeah I like giving you guys just a bit of it at a time. But you'll find out all about soon. Including how Tony got the scar.
Carlos is a total ass. I like making him an ass. Don't look for that to change, heh.
They both have their emotional issues. Michelle isn't used to the way they live. This is all new to her so she's timid. The way Carlos treats her doesn't help. And Tony, well he's just all fucked up.
Guh. Their relationship is so hot, but it kinda makes me sad at the same time - his drinking upsetting her, him feeling like he's going to destroy her, the way she's basically trapped between the brothers.
Agreed with everything you said after Possessive!Tony is HOT. They did a good job on 24 with something ;)
>>Yes, Michelle is the completely innocent bystander in all this. She's being manipulated and it's going to get worse. She's gonna make the biggest mistake of her life all because Carlos wants to destroy Tony. How can you say something like that ??? Now I'm going to wonder what will happen until you update ! You are evil !
Wow, this was incredibly hot! Can't wait to get to know more about this whole Rachel thing and I bet Carlos is already planning his revenge... thanks for adding me and making it possible for me to read this, I'm really enjoying the story! I love how you portray Tony and Michelle in their new field of work ;)
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Carlos is so twisted. I love it. The way he's manipulating Tony and Michelle is just devious!
I love that both Tony and Michelle feel much more than they're letting on. You write the fear mixed with desire so beautifully!
Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Carlos is a total ass. I like making him an ass. Don't look for that to change, heh.
They both have their emotional issues. Michelle isn't used to the way they live. This is all new to her so she's timid. The way Carlos treats her doesn't help. And Tony, well he's just all fucked up.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Great chapter!
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It's so hard to keep them in character while not being in a 24 atmosphere.
I like pulling them through the rough stuff. Angst is hot.
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>>Yes, Michelle is the completely innocent bystander in all this. She's being manipulated and it's going to get worse. She's gonna make the biggest mistake of her life all because Carlos wants to destroy Tony.
How can you say something like that ??? Now I'm going to wonder what will happen until you update ! You are evil !
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It's a huge web I've spun and trying to fit it all is proving harder than I had imagined. But, it will be soon.
I know everyone is ready to hear about Rachel. I just hope after all the buildup, it actually makes sense and works.
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