Comments | yaboiksar: Part 4 of the Song Series: Not Strong Enough

yaboiksar

Part 4 of the Song Series: Not Strong Enough

Aug 08, 2011 14:51

Title: Not Strong Enough
Pairing: Tony/Michelle
Rating: NC-17
SML Universe
Disclaimer: Not mine. *dreams*
Warnings: Sexy time.
AN: Takes place right after they start "seeing" each other. It's not happy or sad. It just is.

Song is "Not Strong Enough" by Apocalyptica featuring Brent Smith.

( Not Strong Enough )

tony/michelle, au, sml

Comments 7

jimkeller24 August 8 2011, 19:54:45 UTC

So good, like really good drugs!!! ;) You know, I always wondered whether alcohol was really the only problem he'd ever had. He just seems like the type. Though what I had in mind was more angled toward pain pills.

But yeah... I think you should definitely get into that some more. I'll read it!

yaboiksar August 8 2011, 20:46:30 UTC

Considering that I absolutely love writing this uni, I'm sure they'll be more about this.

I love him being darker and I love him "tainting" her with it.

jimkeller24 August 8 2011, 21:36:44 UTC

Absolutely! Cause if you ask me, Tony wasn't completely wrong about her in season 4 - she can be pretty patronizing. And that part of her character vs. Tony and his stubbornness... Aw man, I can't wait till you get your next idea. :)

nick_stone22 August 8 2011, 23:41:35 UTC

Tony wasn't completely wrong about her in season 4 - she can be pretty patronizing. She is , in a sort of cutting and feisty way. It's kind of Hot actually. lol ( ... )

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nick_stone22 August 8 2011, 23:15:09 UTC

This wasn’t her. She didn’t cheat and she didn’t have sex in closets with her boyfriend’s brothers.

Is it wrong that I find that whole "forbidden fruit" aspect to their relationship here, makes the whole thing that much hotter? >:-) lol Her cheating on Tony with someone else in a fic, just isn't right (especially if it's with Jack *yuch*.. ) ... But her cheating on someone else with Tony just makes things spicy.

He wasn’t as high all the time as he’d been when they’d first started...whatever this was. Part of her liked to think she was the cause but she didn’t dare go there

We pretty much know from the rest of the series that it is her that makes him change, it just makes their relationship all that more meaningful. It's nice to see the beginnings of that here .

Nice one. Hope you can write more soon.

noalinnea August 18 2011, 21:56:53 UTC

Beautiful. Thanks for the great rea!