Blind Faith, prologue

[yaboiksar]

So this is prolly familiar to some people. I wrote it as a prompt for someone but I liked where it was going so I've decided to change some things and incorporate it into my season 7 story. Of course, as is my M.O. this will not follow season 7 canon.

PG for language

Comments

[jimkeller24]

Do I read some Faust between those lines? Cause I totally love it. :)

[yaboiksar]

Thanks man!

I've been bummed about Dark Magic not getting any reads so I figured, what the hell, start on something else.

[tiah15]

Stop doing this !!! I still haven't read Dark Magic !!! (No, please don't stop XD)

OK...running commentary as usual ;)

lol...Tony is thinking too much. Maybe he only got the nauseous feeling but couldn't have gotten sick anyway.....maybe I'm thinking too much about such unimportant details.

I like Tony's confidence by asking him to repeat himself. Also a very nice intro for us to get to know what Luci proposed. Lucifer sighs ? ROFL. Tony wins :D

Exactly like she was before her death ? When before her death ??? Yes, I don't trust Luci, so I read that paragraph twice to see if he can trick Tony. Now I'm worried it'll be 1 minute before her death and she'll die anyway. YOU BETTER NOT DO THAT TO ME !!! :P

That is just plain smart (and mean) to show Tony all the things he did with Michelle and all the things he could do. He's so easy to read and manipulate around her.

Arghhhhh, I want more. *wanders over to chapter 1.

I love this ♥

[yaboiksar]

Thank you!

I've had this idea for a while. The prompt was finished with this but it just grew in my head so I decided to link it with the season 7 story I was gonna do.

[tiah15]

I somehow vaguely remember you posting a part of that Season 7 story, I think ? With Michelle being blind ? I might just be haluzinating though :D

[yaboiksar]

No I did. You are not hallucinating, heh.