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yaangg

I can't let go

Jun 20, 2010 02:28

I can't let go [1/2]; pg-13; contains mature themes that may not be suitable for younger children

A/N: I didn't really plan this and this is somewhat spontaneous, but this is the best I've written in a while. Raw and unbeta-ed, because it is currently 2:30AM and I do wish to sleep. Might edit later when I'm not hungry and sleepy. Please look forward ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, entry type: fanfiction, fandom: beast, pairing: dongwoon/kikwang

Comments 9

parodying June 19 2010, 18:50:21 UTC

...i sense bad things afoot. :|

although your writing style is refreshingly direct. i love the way they interact, the little details and flare of emotions.

thanks for sharing.

yaangg June 19 2010, 18:59:32 UTC

zomfg you ninja.

i like ;D

well, usually with me, there's never any good things afoot :/ sad to say, but very true. i'm rarely in the mood for fluff or anything nice. i have a very depressing muse.

this is the first time in a looooong time i've read such a nice comment that made me feel so warm and tingly. it was a really nice comment to receive and you made my day (or the remaining 5 minutes of it since i'm going to sleep right after replying to your comment).

thank you for commenting.

p.s: love creeper!kwang there.

also, who hates cold fingers that = typos and html fail

parodying June 19 2010, 19:05:13 UTC

lol i checked the flist and this is an extremely nice surprise. :D

your muse, while depressing, also provides beautiful context and flow of words. i love reading this and i'm looking forward to part 2, although it will probably break my heart or something equally terrible.

and i'm glad my comment makes someone happy. i love this and it's just fair that i express it. thank you very much for writing! this is approved by creeper!kwang. ♥

you can cross-post this to b2stlings too? since that is a dongwoon/kikwang community. although i seriously need to promote it more orz. sorry for the random pimp though!

yaangg June 20 2010, 16:28:46 UTC

LOL WHEN I SAW YOUR ICON I THOUGHT THIS:

( ... )

square_cookie June 20 2010, 16:02:32 UTC

EEP. Poor Kwangie! T_T
He. Is. Really. Scary. Here.
Not the usual dumbkwang.
ZOMG I want the next partttt :) I need more Kiwoon <3

yaangg June 20 2010, 16:22:15 UTC

Let Yoseob cheer you up~!

I intended him to be slightly creepy but not really outright scary maybe I should rewrite this some other time :/ i fail at subtlety and yes, definitely not the usual dumbkwang! :Db I love bimbo!kwang but I prefer exploring different kinds of personalities for him when I write his character.

Unfortunately, not much Dongkwang in the next bit. Maybe I'll write another piece (hopefully soon) about Dongkwang~ ^^

Thank you so much for reading!

jeeeean June 20 2010, 16:09:00 UTC

... This is so beautifully written I want to hug you.
Although I can never imagine Kikwang hissing at Junhyung since Junhyung would be all naggy back but it's very... sweet.

<3 (you can add your own tags!)

yaangg June 20 2010, 16:25:02 UTC

Feel free to raep hug me if you want! can't raep the willing though

In here, I happily highlighted the womanly, slightly timid aspect of Junhyung (I hope I did it right :/) and tbh, I can't imagine the scene myself either, because Kwang is a lovely, sweet and kind bimbo while Junhyung is a bitching, gossipping hoe dangling off Hyunseung's arm :Db

Btw, don't think I mentioned before but-! Yunbuns looks really pained in your icon ):

yunsias June 20 2010, 16:30:51 UTC

Oh wow, I love your spontaneity since it produces this. This is really good and even though it was written in a simple way, the impact is still felt. I'm really intrigued by this, please update soon!

P.S: I think it's amazing how you can write this with the inspiration of "Darkness Eyes". I've always love the song but I can never understand what it's all about.