What's in your bag?

Feb 20, 2009 10:03

Title: a list is just a list
Genre: General
Characters: ^___^ Guess who! *looks at icon* ... Darn.
Summary: Random security screening. Every bag must be searched and a list describing the contents recorded.
Disclaimer: RP with a fair amount of assumptions, a.k.a. imagination. That’s why it’s called fan fiction. …Please don’t sue me -_ ( Read more... )

fic: takarazuka, !fic, osasa, haruno sumire, sena jun, takarazuka, fic: list, !collaboration

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skye_fall February 20 2009, 18:19:34 UTC
Consider her the co-writer of this piece ^___^
*feels loved* XDD

ROFL, the movie stub from '92! XD And I love both of their text messages. XDD
And the shopping list reflecting the picnic on Asa's calendar (which I totally missed the first time xP) is ♥♥♥

Monogram: HSJ
♥♥♥♥ I love that.... a lot. *gggg*

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y_n_k February 20 2009, 19:20:50 UTC
And I love both of their text messages. XDD
LOL - I think those were your lines, actually!

And the shopping list reflecting the picnic on Asa's calendar (which I totally missed the first time xP) is ♥♥♥
Doing things like that was what made this one a lot more fun than I had expected! It was like, "Hmm, how many connections can I make?" XD

Everytime I think of "monogram" I hear the song "Someone to watch over me" in my head ^^;

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skye_fall February 20 2009, 22:38:48 UTC
XD Just the 'sounding like the girl' one was.... they both still amuse me, even if I already knew them. XP

Everytime I think of "monogram" I hear the song "Someone to watch over me" in my head ^^;
*has no idea whatsoever what you're talking about* *fail* XDD

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just_keep_on February 20 2009, 23:50:41 UTC
*has no idea whatsoever what you're talking about* *fail* XDD
Are you kidding me?!? Come on, I'm not *that* much older than you!!! Gershwin, man!!

All right, found you a recording here by the girl who sang it on the movie "Mr. Holland's Opus." Now, if you haven't watched *that* movie ... I don't know what I'll do XP

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dybji February 20 2009, 23:09:36 UTC
When, by description of the calendar, my brain moved past the question of whose bag #23 must be, I paused briefly to panic at the fact that I was clearly more Zuka-literate than I had thought.

Then I realized it wasn't me, it was the writing. I wasn't actually figuring out what bag was Asako's, I was reading a story that was showing which bag was Asako's, and showing who Asako was, all without doing anything but listing contents.
And so I had to scrap the expert theory, and instead arrived at the only possible conclusion to be drawn: that you are brilliant. <3

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y_n_k February 21 2009, 00:10:26 UTC
First: Wow, you were able to figure it out just by the calendar? *gives cookie*

Second: Your comment filled me with an incredible amount of squee that I had to let it out for fear of exploding; it caused the people in the car next to me (I was at a stoplight, checking my mail on my phone) to look at me strangely but it completely didn't matter XD

Third: I wish I could take credit for all the brilliance but Steph (skye_fall) definitely deserves a lot of credit because she helped lure back my muse and brainstorm a majority of these things. Also, the original idea of a list story came from The 3 A.M. Epiphany - I'm very much in love with Brian Kiteley and all of his prompts right now ^___^ Also, it continues to surprise me how sometimes it takes very little to create a story.

Fourth and finally: Thank you very much for reading and commenting! Super glad you liked it~

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econn February 21 2009, 11:48:44 UTC
I figured it out from the calendar too ^^; Just from the cover actually, since Asako loves dogs.

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y_n_k February 21 2009, 15:34:33 UTC
LOL - and here I was trying to be all clever XD

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kuna February 21 2009, 01:05:12 UTC
Wow, great job both of you! I have to agree with dybji in that I was really surprised at how well you matched the objects to their personalities.

I love the idea of them collecting each other's merchandise with the pens. *g* And Asako being out of gum.

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y_n_k February 21 2009, 04:56:10 UTC
<333

I love the idea of them collecting each other's merchandise with the pens. *g*
That one was Steph's ^_____^ Incredibly fitting, especially in Asako's case, right? XD

*is happy you liked it*

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econn February 21 2009, 04:57:47 UTC
I think my favorite part is Asako stealing Osa's animal crackers. And probably her gum too. XD

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y_n_k February 21 2009, 05:03:12 UTC
LOL, caught that did you? And I'm thinking Osa tried to pick a flavor that Asako wouldn't like, but Asako ended up liking it - hence why she took two XDD

But that's a story for another day ... ^___^

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econn February 21 2009, 05:35:11 UTC
Klepto little thing, isn't she?

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y_n_k February 21 2009, 05:39:18 UTC
LOL - she is, isn't she? ^^; The only thing Osa stole ... well, I guess the pic for her cell phone wallpaper, though there's not really enough to infer that XD

Though, you never know - Osa may have stolen Asako's clothes or something XD

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anthy1306 February 23 2009, 18:27:26 UTC
*gg* I found out through the pens ^^

I just thought: hmmm....so many colours...and neon üens....sounds pretty much more like Asako, than like Osa.

Very cool and brilliant idea! It is so detailed in many ways, that I would really believe, it was just like this XD

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y_n_k March 18 2009, 03:57:33 UTC
Yay, the pens! Asako definitely strikes me as a colorful sort of person XDDD

Glad you liked this!

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