The Man Who Sold The World [1/1]

[hanorganaas]

Title The Man Who Sold The World
Fandom Hawaii Five-0
Rating PG-13
Pairing Character Study, Mentions of Steve/Danny  and Danny/Rachel
Summary Steves thoughts as he takes his mugshot in 1x25
Warnings Slash
Spoilers Season Finale
Disclaimer Unless I was god I do not sadly own the Franchise.
Notes: Lyrics are from the Nirvana Cover of The Song "The Man

Comments

[gyri]

Wow. Great job with this!

[hanorganaas]

Thanks dear and Props for the Sheppy Icon.

[quoththewriter]

Hey you! This was lovely - poor Steve! Ugh, I can't even imagine what's going through his head right now after all of that. He's got to believe Danny will get him out of it, though. Him and Kono. Poor baby. *hugs him*

Also, I applaud your choice of song. <3

(Oh, and for the record, Steve is not a marine. He's a SEAL. In his words, "The Navy, Danny! The Navy.")

Loved this!

[hanorganaas]

I thought it would be perfect especially for a moment like that where he lost everything.

Anyway yes it was a silly error I knew Steve was a seal hell I was joking about how Steve killed Bin Ladin hours before, I guess I was so wrapped up in picking Steve's brain I forgot that little tidbit

Thanks love.

[ssw_loved]

He thinks of Kono, her enthusiasm, her free spirit. The woman is a fighter, she made it out of bigger messes she could make it out of this. He knows she will. His only hope is that one day; she could forgive him for tarnishing such a bright future for her

[hanorganaas]

Thanks dear....oh may I mention how hard it was to describe Chin....

[starbuckssue]

Very well done, I love the way Steves emotions went from one extreme to the other, this was so beautifully descriptive and I'm glad Danny was there for him in the end.

[hanorganaas]

Had t write that part in, the story was getting wangsty, thanks for the review!