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And Suddenly I Fell [1/1]

Sep 28, 2013 19:18

Title And Suddenly I Fell [1/1]
Fandom Torchwood
Rating R
Pairing Jack/Ianto
Summary After the events of Countrycide, Jack takes care of Ianto awakening romantic feelings within our favorite teaboy
Warnings Mentions of previous Torture...so may be a bit triggery.
Disclaimer I do not own any of the characters in this fic, this event is just a part ( Read more... )

ficlet, pairing: jack/ianto, gift!fic, fandom: torchwood

Comments 8

too_beauty September 29 2013, 01:17:18 UTC

Lovely!

ukdramafan September 29 2013, 01:20:31 UTC

Lovely story of Jack taking care of Ianto, and Ianto having difficulty coming to terms with his feelings for Jack. One concrit: it would benefit from using a beta as there were quite a lot of grammar/continuity faults which distracted from the story. For example, missing words: ".. and was self conscious" could be "and he was" or "he felt". Don't stop writing, as these things improve the more you do.

excentric397 September 29 2013, 04:00:18 UTC

I agree. Nice story, just needs a bit of tidying up. Ianto need taking care of. Good for him giving Jack another chance, too.

Oh, oh, oh!!! squidgiepdx September 29 2013, 02:47:29 UTC

OMG, poor tortured Ianto!!!! Awwwww.... OMG, I loved this so much! Thank you for my awesome story!!!! :)

aya2013 September 29 2013, 18:19:23 UTC

sweet! thanks for sharing!

jedi_harkness September 30 2013, 02:48:31 UTC

Beautiful story! I agree it that it needs a little tidying up, but I hope you'll keep on writing. Thanks so much for sharing!