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hanorganaas in y0ungandl0aded

Lack of Control [1/1]

Jun 18, 2013 15:36

Title Lack of Control [1/1]
Fandoms Doctor Who
Rating R
Pairing/Characters Eleven/River
Summary There were times he wanted to be submissive. Let someone else take control for once rather than be the one in control and regretting it later when things went wrong.
Warnings Light Bondage and BDSM Elements
Disclaimer I do not own any of the characters ( Read more... )

challenge: 1_million_words, fandom: doctor who, pairing: eleven/river, drabble

Comments 18

justascrewup2 June 18 2013, 23:35:39 UTC

Very interesting to see the different fic reactions to the NotD revelations. I can totally see this as one of the options. You know, before she basically poofs :(

hanorganaas June 19 2013, 04:20:34 UTC

Well i meant for this to be after "Angels Take Manhattan" but it could be a fic after that too =P.

But god dont remind me my babies =(.

justascrewup2 June 19 2013, 23:51:50 UTC

Ah, sorry for the confusion. This is obviously a post ATM fic, but since you wrote it after NotD that's how I was seeing it. The two epis are all tangled up in my head after NotD and all that had to happen in between them. *sniffle*

daxcat79 June 19 2013, 03:30:21 UTC

I love you for writing this! :D

hanorganaas June 19 2013, 04:22:03 UTC

THE PROMPT WAS SO SCREAMING THEM IT WAS NOT EVEN FRAKING FUNNY MAN.

I have never gone this far into some sort of smut with the two of them yet I save it for Sparky and Clintasha....but this was my first time and it was fun man.

Thanks for the review =D.

daxcat79 June 19 2013, 04:47:28 UTC

Well, I'm glad you took the leap! River and Eleven are just too good to pass up! :)

hanorganaas June 19 2013, 05:00:45 UTC

I KNOW THEY ARE MY BABIES -pets-

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cannibalilly June 19 2013, 16:09:03 UTC

Wonderful idea, I like it a lot :) Works great with the Doctor & River~
It makes me want more of this, not necessarily more detailed (though I wouldn't complain about details either ;3) but mainly a longer story around the control-issue would be brilliant.
*puts to memories*

hanorganaas June 30 2013, 21:21:23 UTC

I will do so someday thank you for the add!!!

cannibalilly July 1 2013, 14:10:23 UTC

You're welcome :) And it'd be just great!

fannishliss June 19 2013, 19:45:56 UTC

i liked this a lot. I see the submissive streak in Eleven -- in fact I also have a long post-Angels! story out to beta right now that explores the same topic! :)

You did a great job making it feel real.

hanorganaas June 30 2013, 21:21:59 UTC

-bows- thank you very much I am glad you enjoyed it

priarani560 June 20 2013, 12:01:47 UTC

Very interesting. I really enjoyed reading this.

hanorganaas June 30 2013, 21:22:22 UTC

Thanks for the review!