Too Young, Desperate For Attention [1/1]

[hanorganaas]

Title Too Young, Desperate For Attention [1/1]
Fandom Stargate Atlantis
Rating PG-13
Pairing None
Summary He wanted acceptance. It was the only reason 18 year old John Sheppard followed his fellow air force trainees into the woods that night even though it risked losing his dreams to fly sneaking out of bed.
Warnings Description of an Hazing

Comments

[azuredragonlady]

Love this story. John's charaterisation is spot on! Thanks for sharing!

[hanorganaas]

One year Roleplaying Sheppard really does the trick XD. Thank you.

[kazbaby]

I can see how that treatment shaped the John we know.

Dang that brought back some not-so-nice memories of my own years at school. so I can get how John felt in that cafeteria and on the walk to the woods.

[hanorganaas]

Believe me It wasnt easy with my high school horror stories, to write.

Anyway thanks for your review it means alot =D

[titan5]

I've never been hazed like that, but I've been the lone person in the cafeteria/meeting room/where ever more times than I care to remember (still am sometimes). You really nailed it. I'm so glad John paid attention and tried to remedy that situation. When you've been there, you tend to notice. Wonderful read!!

[hanorganaas]

I know the feeling too. I went to a rough high school where judging people was a sport. And I really appreciate the review. I was really doubting this fic but I am SO GLAD people love it!

[melodysparks]

Oh that was good, so John Sheppard. Great work

[hanorganaas]

Thank you so much!

[melodysparks]

Youre welcome

[thunknwhump]

Poor John, bullies suck! Nice ending :)

[hanorganaas]

Thank you so much.