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xxxalexandraxxx

Can't Get That At Home 5/?

Nov 03, 2010 18:36

But does she love you Like she loves me?
Does she think of you When she's holding me?Maura leaned against her desk , trying not to think, trying her best to forget. It had been a month since she had spoken to Jane about anything other than dead bodies. The detective had been going out of her way to avoid Maura. There was no teasing or flirting over ( Read more... )

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blakeighhollis November 3 2010, 22:58:32 UTC

*mouth hanging open...closes it* OMG lmao i did not expect her to say it like that! but then again it is Jane *scratches chin* anyway i really was cracking up at that last part. more please...pls tell me Jane goes after Maura with a vengeance :) loving it so far

xxxalexandraxxx November 3 2010, 23:52:23 UTC

it actually wasn't supposed to happen like that at all!! I had a completely different way for her to tell Vince planned but I got to writing and that's what I came up with lol.

blakeighhollis November 4 2010, 02:36:13 UTC

l0l i loved it tho!!!!!

jennjenn30 November 4 2010, 03:29:00 UTC

I hope the finding out you have a sister is a good thing. I can definitely see how that would put writing on the back burner, and congrats on the job. Thanks for still taking the time to put up this great chapter. This is one of the stories that I look forward too...:-)

xxxalexandraxxx November 4 2010, 04:29:10 UTC

It is a good thing we have a lot in common look a hell of a lot alike. And we are only like 4 months apart so its really really cool:D I'm. Going to try to get as much written as I can tomorrow before work and hopefully have something up by the end of the week:D I'm so glad you look forward to this story!