Raspberry on the Lips - Aoi/Ruki (1/1)

[xxshamisen]

Title: Raspberry on the Lips
Chapter(s): 1/1
Author: aimaitrace @ xxshamisen
Genre: Romance, slight angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Aoi/Ruki
Disclaimer: Real people, real circumstances, fake stories.
Summary: It frustrated him that even if Aoi was supposedly as easy as a book to read, still he couldn’t read the words that hid behind those fathomless eyes.

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Ooooh, pretty! I liked the angsty part, for some reason seeing Ruki pining for Aoi was very enjoyable to read. Must be because of the heartbreak, the way you described it It frustrated him that the mixture of their breaths was probably the closest he could ever get to Aoi. And I like your setting, the cigarette smoke coming from both their mouths, and it tasting bitter for Ruki until the very end. I expected this to end up as angst, but once again you made it a happy end. You have a lovely way of doing it <3

[xxshamisen]

We can has fluff, ninja. 8D

[heygeorge]

YES YOU CAN WRITE. lshdfglsdhfg dfkhsdgfklsdgfdskfdfhhsddfhs OH MY, OTP SATISFACTION.
I really enjoyed that this time it was Ruki suffering and the line Aoi was supposedly as easy as a book to read, still he couldn’t read the words that hid behind those fathomless eyes is full on, because sure you can think you have Aoi all figured out and think he is a simple guy, a lot must be going on behind his goofy face. I love Ruki being bitter and giving up on things and giving up on Aoi - and then things change. an unpleasant scent that filled his nose was fucking sexy, because Aoi was so close to him and ddddddhhhhfff oh yes.
Thank you again!

[xxshamisen]

LOLOLOL bb I can make you keyboardsmash mmmmm.

What the hell, you see sexayy everywhere, don't you. Then again, it's Aoi. :D

[fa_ying]

now i wanted to make an all sophisticated comment but ninja and george already said what i found most enjoyable xDD nevertheless: AWWWWWW THANK YOU WONDERFUL :D

i liked ruki being unable to understand everyone this time when hes normally all knowing and stuff <3 and aoi being kinda mysterious and not saying anything up to the point that ruki is so frustrated that he gives up
and just the image with the mingling smoke and ruki wanting to be close to aoi but couldnt...
AND that aoi coaxed ruki outside by mere words and not force <3 that gave me a nice feeling
beautiful <3

[xxshamisen]

Ruki has always been an all-knowing person to me, ahah~ and mysterious!Aoi is mysterious. 8D

♥

[yhue]

ajbleurghdsd.vdf .____.

♥ I love when you write these silent fluffy but not too fluffy fics.

-jizz-

[xxshamisen]

That seems to be what I'm good at, yes.

♥

[xastralxromance]

I really... really liked this. There is this... subtly that I think is just incredibly beautiful and poetic. I love the way this was written and I'm really, really happy I clicked on it. Amazing job. <3

[xxshamisen]

Oh, thank you for your kind words~ ♥