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xxlostitxx

miscommunications 24/32

Oct 19, 2010 20:00

Title:Miscommunications 24/42
Author: xxlostitxx
Pairing: callie/erica
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters or settings.
Authors Note: Thank you to my wonderful beta Rachel. You have been fantastic : )

( . I needed her, I needed my children as well. I didn’t want to lose all three for something that I hadn’t wanted to happen. )

erica/callie

Comments 8

whitelder October 19 2010, 10:27:49 UTC

you need to make these things longer especially with such a long period between each, its not really fair on us.

xxlostitxx October 20 2010, 06:36:49 UTC

i've made 2 updates in 2 days. you can't really expect anything more than that.
All my stories chapters are this long and that won't be changing. I'm sorry if you don't like it but there is nothing i can do about it. If you don't like the length of the chapters then don't read them now. wait till i have posted them all.

whitelder October 20 2010, 07:06:33 UTC

These are more like drabbles then full chapters, chapters are meant to be at least a page long not a few paragraphs, you saw Manic's comment and I agree with her, this is getting frustrating leaving us with tid bits instead of full chapters, you have 42 chapters in this, should probably only be about 20 had you done it properly, and yes I can expect more then that especially since they are so short. This may be your first foray into writing, perhapse it would have been better for you to read and take note of the length of multy chaptered fiction before posting these small snippets especially when you leave us hanging for weeks on end. Im sorry you asked for criticism and I will not hold back when I am getting frustrated at the length and the lack of updating.

xxlostitxx October 21 2010, 04:07:41 UTC

if you'd read a previous note i wrote, you would know that my laptop crashed and therefore my hard drive needed to be wiped and it fix my laptop straight away as it had to be taken to someone in another state. i then had to re write some chapters that were lost. i am updating now, and although i like to have as many reader reading this story as possible, if you are frustrated by it then don't read it.
not all stories have such long chapters and i like this length. I have accepted that this is your criticism but i will not be changing the structure of my story.

chellix18 October 19 2010, 12:45:07 UTC

oh my god!!!!i havent even read it but im giggling with excitement already!

xxlostitxx October 20 2010, 06:37:05 UTC

haha! well i hope you like it.

berlygruvr October 20 2010, 17:57:20 UTC

Another update!! yay!!!!

xxlostitxx October 21 2010, 04:08:59 UTC

yeah : )
more to come soon.