Comments | xwaltzforvenus: vaguely one-shoty drabbleness

xwaltzforvenus

vaguely one-shoty drabbleness

Feb 06, 2009 00:06

So I'm not quite sure what the defining length is between a oneshot and a drabble, so I've decided to tag it as both. Whatevs.

Also, don't ask where this came from. I'm really tired and yes, I intentionally wrote it in long, run on sentences. Don't ask why, it's just what came out.

I can never really control what comes out of my head and how.

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genre: oneshot, genre: drabble, fandom: oc

Comments 19

beege22 February 6 2009, 06:19:45 UTC

Nice timing with the awwwwww fic considering that Brandy's currently torturing us with psychotic!Taylor.

Very, very schmaltzy, but I rather liked the third person no-direct-dialogue style and the tone you achieved.

xwaltzforvenus February 6 2009, 16:37:28 UTC

I tend to write like this very late at night when punctuation and capitalization becomes too much of a chore. Although apparently italics? Not a chore.

fifimom February 6 2009, 11:10:41 UTC

Lovely, thanks.

xwaltzforvenus February 6 2009, 16:36:37 UTC

Thanks!

kazfloyd February 6 2009, 13:10:36 UTC

Superman!! So cute! Very well done. I am glad Ryan is finally happy. I also like how you compared Trey and Seth is in head in relation to his boys.

xwaltzforvenus February 6 2009, 16:36:27 UTC

The Superman tie was very appropriate, I think...

Thanks!

taylorforever February 6 2009, 13:33:41 UTC

That´s what I want for Ryan. And thanks for the nice names you picked. Could have been brie and camenbert.

xwaltzforvenus February 6 2009, 16:36:01 UTC

Ha! David and Logan are the standard-issue children's names I use whenever Ryan has to have children. (I'm totally ignoring the fact that I want to name my children that...)

kazfloyd February 6 2009, 17:42:09 UTC

What about Cody? LOL. The kid at the end of the show will always be Cody to me.

ITA about Superman too! Great choice.

xwaltzforvenus February 6 2009, 17:50:20 UTC

Hee! Oh Cody... Glad I made an impression on someone!

60schic February 6 2009, 21:22:22 UTC

I love the tone of this; so calm and peaceful even while referencing the daily grind and the distant, miserable past.

I also like that you didn't name his wife, so really - it doesn't have to be Taylor.

This is more than a drabble but shorter than a ficlet - I think one-shot covers it all.

xwaltzforvenus February 7 2009, 06:18:22 UTC

I definitly left out the wife's name for a reason. People can fill in the blank. Taylor, some random girl, themselves...

60schic February 7 2009, 15:27:45 UTC

themselves...

Hee...who would ever do that?

xwaltzforvenus February 7 2009, 21:53:55 UTC

Certainly not me... of course not...