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[xvanilla_cokex]

Title: Broken Pews and Empty Aisles
Author: xvanilla_cokex / tune out
Band: Avenged Sevenfold
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone mentioned in this story. Nor do I have any affiliation. It is all fiction, it is all in good fun. Brand New, however, owns the title.
Summary: Brian is on the verge of a complete breakdown.
Date(s) Posted: 03/10/06

Comments

[kaytvengeance]

that was so powerfully written. I think you captured the sheer desperation and loneliness that depression causes, the fact that people are around you but you still feel utterly alone in the world.

I'm not going to say anymore, I don't think I need to

[xvanilla_cokex]

I started writing that back in december, which is why it has that breif mention of holidays coming up, but I was just feeling that way. It's something I've always kind of dealt with, so I knew how to capture the feeling. But thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ♥

[indirection_]

Because I had the impulse to check my LJ before school.. It's destined, right? lmao.

Regardless, <3.
A pair of hands reached under your armpits, pulling your struggling body out of the water. You coughed and sputtered, your blackened lungs fighting for air, trying to force the water from your lungs. You spat up some, coughing hard and crying still, shaking as the water overflowed around the two of you, your eyes finally opening. And maybe it was the fact that you were oxygen deprived, but the way the bathroom light shone around Zacky’s body, he looked to be glowing.
Aww man. That got me right in the chest.

[piecesxmended_]

*tear*
That was amazing
♥

[live_formore]

I loved this so much, it was beautiful. I'm not a cryer but it had me all sniffl-y and such.. The emotions in it were well written and you could really feel what they were feeling.. if that makes any sense. Deffinately one for the memories.

[musiclover666]

That was beautiful. You are an amazing writer. I could never pull something off like this. I mean the way you are with emotions... It's absolutely breath taking. I could hug you right now... Amazing.