Breaking Expectations [Ace Attorney; Miles/Phoenix]

[xtwilightzx]

It's been a little hard getting myself motivated to write when I'm trying not to hack my lungs out - walking out in the rain during winter is not a good idea, because I think I made myself sicker no worries, there has been no fever! On the other hand, I looked at my fic-list and despaired at how much I have yet to write, so I sat myself down for a

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[cannedebonbon]

Frick frick frick ahhh you do know how much I owe you for this right?! AHHHH This is filled with all sorts of UST and sexy that I don't even aflaksjdflkasjfd. /incoherent

The chances of you getting accompany art for this fic has just increased about tenfold. ;u; Your description of everything Miles does is just so appealing and full of fabulous. <3 And it's just so CUTE that Miles's trying to prove to Phoenix that he can totally do rock after overhearing him. Pfffft. If it was anybody else who said it, Miles probably wouldn't give a damn at all.

...not that Phoenix was used to being alone in a cramped backstage dressing room with an increasingly predatory Miles. <--- That needs to be rectified, obviously. >;D OHOHOHOHOHO.

I keep getting godly fics this holiday. BEST CHRISTMAS EVER. C': I'll try to finish your art asap. 8DDDDD GOODNESS KNOWS I NEED TO RETURN THE FAVOUR.

P.S. Hope you're recovering from your cold.

[xtwilightzx]

I've still got to write you the TA!AU, you realize? It'll probably be in January, though. SO MUCH WRITING TO DO.

The UST was totally killing me! And Miles just went ultimately predatory on me. I was daydreaming and suddenly BAM, he's trapping Phoenix with his violin bow. I don't know what happened - I had to work to make Phoenix not cave in like a deck of cards.

And yes. Miles does a lot of things because it's Phoenix. So tsun.

ILU if you drew art, if only because sexy black electric violin is sexy and putting string instruments in people's hands seems to automatically make them into hot, hot versions of themselves.

Thanks. Still rather knocked out - the cold's getting better, but I'm drowsy all the time and still coughing like crazy. I hate being sick, ugh.

[cannedebonbon]

Good luck writing? I'll have to start on my doujin one day... AN will be here before I know it.

THAT TRAPPING PHOENIX WITH THE BOW PART WAS HELLA AWESOME. So I'm glad you were daydreaming and it wrote itself in? Though I was afraid that Phoenix's going to accidentally snap his bow.

I need the dere part too. D: Just having tsun isn't MOE enough.

You're definitely getting at least one drawing of Miles with his electric violin if not more, once I figure out how that frickin' instrument works. ...By your theory, Marvin Grossberg would look better with a violin too? >;D

I'm drawing your UK/US right now, and yes UK is topping?! I don't know how that happened. I wasn't even trying to make him seme either. I guess miracles do happen. 8D

[xtwilightzx]

Um, I got totally distracted because the person who wrote the band!AU for APH updated. So. Distracted.

It was a very nice image, but so damn hard to put into words >: Don't worry, it's an electric violin's bow - it wouldn't be horse hair, it'd be carbon fiber, so it's slightly more durable (unless Phoenix goes and snaps the whole wooden frame). Plus that's why Miles went all "break it, and I will be very displeased" XD

>: Thanks, I did not need that image. Well, it'll make him slightly more acceptable than usual.

\o/ seme!UK! I look forward to it!

Speaking of AN - if you want to get a table with the UTAMA art team, you better talk to Yvie (China!) soon. I think the sales start on Jan 1. Her DA username is "nux".

[flames05]

lol i thought u were makiing a comment on the miles edgeworth game for some reason when i looked at the title XDDD

[xtwilightzx]

lol, perhaps this might be a prediction for the future? XD which would be epic. Titles are my bane - I'd finish the fic but spend ages coming up with a title and the fic never gets posted.. so I just choose whatever for this one.

Have they fixed your heater yet? O_o;;

[selenity136]

This was good. Really good. I like how you twisted the idea of battle of the bands and chuck out this ^^. Especially love the whole pred!dom!Miles. I don't suppose you'll be willing to write a sequel to this one?

[xtwilightzx]

The moment Miles stepped out with his electric violin, he became so incredibly predatory! I don't have a sequel planned, so unless inspiration hits me in a big way, I'd say no - in fact, this fic first only contained the part where Miles appears on stage, and I wrote the rest in.

But I'm really glad you like it enough to want a sequel ♥ Thank you for reading!

[nanani]

WOW THANK YOU.

Rock and this pairing is a beautiful blending of some of my favourite things.

I have a few nitpicks though...
First, lead vocalist and band leader is NOT the same thing. You can't call all the lead singers and then say it is the same as calling all the band leaders. Lots of bands have a different arranement, especially in rock. (Band manager sound-off)

Second "an alumni" is incorrect, and we all know Miles would NEVER make such a mistake ^.^;; The singular is alumnus.

Other than that, it was hot. It was lovely. Please make more !

[xtwilightzx]

Ah, thank you very much for the corrections - I don't know much about bands, so this helps. I can't believe I missed alumni/alumnus though *head desk* Argh.

And I'm glad you enjoyed the fic =) The image of Edgeworth and his violin is quite irresistible XD and Phoenix thinks so too.

[nekocrouton]

Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous. I'm so happy that cannedebonbon linked to it. <3

I freaking LOVE domly/predatory!Miles. UNF. 8D But really, I just adored this whole thing. Nice work. ^_^

[xtwilightzx]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have a thing for toppy!Miles, and the moment I put that electric violin in his hands, he went all the way to the extreme. Oh Miles.

cannedebonbon's pretty awesome to write for, ahaha~

[nekocrouton]

I did, I loved it! ^_^ And I totally have a thing for toppy!Miles as well. 8D UNF.

Awww. That she is. Plus, she can illustrate your writing. ;D

[xtwilightzx]

There needs to be more confident, smexy, toppy Miles. I'm waiting for the Edgeworth game to come out in English so we can see him with most of his issues resolved and being his smug prosecutor self.

Indeed XD. Sometimes, we have a weird feedback system where I fic something she drew, which prompts more fan art, and back and forth. It's good inspiration, I'll admit~