Comments | xturncoatxiii: Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight [:3 drabble]

xturncoatxiii

Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight [:3 drabble]

Oct 28, 2007 22:49

Title: lately you're all I need
Fandom: xxxHOLiC
Wordcount: 193
Summary: In which Doumeki reflects on Watanuki and draws a conclusion.
A/N: I was bored. In the kitchen. Was supposed to be writing essay. Was surprise!sexxed by this. Right.
Warnings?: UNBETAED as are all my fics. EDITS ARE LOVE PLZTHNX. :D

He’d seen that smile a few times, passing ( Read more... )

xxxholic, 104fic, 1-0-fucking-4, doumeki shizuka

Comments 24

renki_chan October 29 2007, 10:46:34 UTC

WOW I love this drabble!! Very good indeed ^_^
OH Shizuka, this makes me want to hug him XD

xturncoatxiii October 30 2007, 20:23:22 UTC

Ah, I know~

Thank you~

empress_izzy October 29 2007, 11:04:15 UTC

Oh. Oh oh oh.

the only thing he can regret is that he’s never made Watanuki smile.

You! Youyouyouyou-- that just knocked all the air out of my lungs somehow.

tsuxx October 29 2007, 19:01:02 UTC

SECONDED.

dfgdfjhwow.

xturncoatxiii October 30 2007, 20:22:50 UTC

Gosh, thank you guys both so much.

It's almost depressing the way I practically word vomit and it turns out good. I surprise myself. Egad.

dottiesunfish October 29 2007, 11:14:56 UTC

entities that were not Shizuka and therefore had only apathy directed at them.

I like how you delved into how he felt before and after meeting Watanuki, and this line just really gets me cracking up for some reason.
Doumeki reallllly doesn't know how much joy he brings to Watanuki, does he? xD (Despite Watanuki's denial, we all know the truth...)

iambickilometer October 29 2007, 22:52:11 UTC

your icon. Is so much win.

dottiesunfish October 30 2007, 09:29:09 UTC

Thanks. xD I was being bored and playing around on photoshop with screencaps. I absolutely <3 your "My Doumeki senses are tingling!" icon. XD

iambickilometer October 30 2007, 15:08:21 UTC

You're welcome. :D Wish I could say I made it, but I gleaned it from here. Thank you, though, in terms of taste.

Thread 5

iambickilometer October 29 2007, 22:51:50 UTC

Makes me laugh EVERY TIME.

Doumeki's conclusion = OH HAY I FAIL AT THIS.

vinval October 30 2007, 04:18:50 UTC

AGREED. POOR LONELY BOY. *huggles him*

I tweaked an eyebrow, went "awwww" and lol'd in 193 words.

iambickilometer October 30 2007, 04:29:33 UTC

HE NEEDS HIM SOME LOVIN'. Fic time, GO?

vinval October 30 2007, 07:01:11 UTC

speaking of, you and Turncoat fight for beta rights on Because Love #9, y/n? XD

Thread 10

tomoyohime8 October 30 2007, 05:03:43 UTC

DOUMEKI ONLY NEEDS A BIT MORE TIME - WATANUKI LIKES TO PLAY HARD TO GET, DOESN'T HE?

xturncoatxiii October 30 2007, 20:20:35 UTC

YES HE DOES, THOUGH HE'S NOT CONSCIOUS OF HIS BEHAVIOR.

(I am getting around to responding to comments on previous entries, I'm just slow...or lazy. One of the two).