Comments | xtsukanda: :Sirens, Should Be Noticed:

xtsukanda

:Sirens, Should Be Noticed:

Dec 31, 2009 16:30

Lol, you can somewhat say 3mme3mme inspired me to write this? I actually had this idea in my head for like two days now, and I spent 20 minutes typing it out here. 8D

I don't think it's mature themed...just a little dark.
No harsh language either, So...enjoy? Please do comment. Possibly my first time writing a short story out of enjoyment. xP

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krissified December 31 2009, 22:17:21 UTC

Lmao if you get drunk so easily that happens.

And you could also get laid without even knowing it.

xtsukanda December 31 2009, 22:26:40 UTC

LOL.
Good thing I hold my liquor well? xD

...and yet I refuse to write a story about that. 8D

krissified December 31 2009, 22:29:39 UTC

ORLY? Not as well as me, i bet.

Haha yeah it'd be awkward if you did ;;

xtsukanda December 31 2009, 22:31:50 UTC

OH, YOU'RE ON! We shall test this...in a few years. 8D

Very, very awkward.

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sunflowerlion January 1 2010, 03:45:56 UTC

BTW this is an awesome short story. :D

B-But you need a beta. l-like me? C-Can I be your beta? I'M PERFECT.

xtsukanda January 1 2010, 04:05:19 UTC

LOL thanks. First person to actually comment ABOUT THE STORY. D<

W-what does a beta do? BUT YOU'RE HIRED ANYWAYS. SO MAKE YOURSELF USEFUL! 8D

sunflowerlion January 1 2010, 04:06:23 UTC

LIKE TOTALLY, BBY

BETAS LIKE, WE CHECK OVER YOUR STUFF FOR SPELLING, GRAMMAR, AND PLOT HOLES

AND WE SUGGEST STUFF TO FIX IT UP AND MAKE IT AWESOME

JA?

HAPPY NEW YEAR'S, BTW.

xtsukanda January 1 2010, 04:11:52 UTC

OH, SO LIKE AN EDITOR RIGHT? BUT WITH A KOOLER NAME.
Yeah bby, you're totally hired! 83 But I don't know if you'll ever get work ever again...ROFL. I am rarely in the writing mood, unless it's for an assignment.

HAPPY NEW YEARS, ISSY DEAR. LET'S HAVE NEW YEARS SMEX.

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3mme3mme January 1 2010, 18:21:06 UTC

xD i thought the siren was cus of like.. the actual car. I thought the car was a police car that "you" were driving LOLOL ahem :>

but yah, the baby part was like wtf? !-!

xtsukanda January 1 2010, 19:04:49 UTC

HAHA. You thought "I" stole a police car? :O That would have been interesting too I guess.

Lol, good! I wanted it to be unexpected. I sort of felt that the SFX was too obvious. ._.;

timeofknight January 8 2010, 03:01:42 UTC

xDD nice! is this the first post of this story?

xtsukanda January 8 2010, 03:23:32 UTC

Rofl nope, its the only post. xD It's just a really short story I had stuck in my head. xP