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xtiltawhirlx

Matrimonial Surprises (7c/?)

Sep 19, 2012 05:02

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Jeff was sound asleep on his stomach when he was suddenly woken by a weight settling on his lower back. He grunted and blindly reached back with one hand only to make contact with Annie’s leg. He peeled his eyes open and groggily looked back at her.

Annie smiled brightly at him, “Hi.”

His head fell back onto the pillow with a thud. “What ( Read more... )

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iknowitsbutters September 19 2012, 22:54:32 UTC

It's something when you post 8,000 words of something and it still doesn't feel like enough - though some of that might be because you cut away from the bedroom stuff. The rest had to do with Christmas bonding, Annie's pregnancy boobs, Jeff/Shirley and Annie/Britta bonding spoiling me as well. Especially Jeff/Shirley and Annie/Britta bonding [which you've been familar with in the past as well] and the sexy times you were decent enough to show us.

And LJ was a bitch to me a few weeks back when I tried to post my kink meme shorts on MM, so I know where you're coming from there. But maybe you'll be readier for it when you post the next 8,000 words at a time soon - hopefully.

xtiltawhirlx September 21 2012, 04:20:48 UTC

Seriously, what is going on with LJ?! There's no reason to keep saying a post is too large when I, and others, have posted way longer ones! Maybe it's a glitch in the system?

Anyway, I threw in the Jeff/Shirley and Annie/Britta parts because I know some people like those relationships (including myself) so I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

nyclove3 September 19 2012, 23:38:59 UTC

xtiltawhirlx September 21 2012, 04:15:21 UTC

I love relationship fics, too! It's part of the reason I love yours so much :)

I'm glad you liked the Britta bit, I wasn't too sure about it.

nyclove3 September 21 2012, 04:33:45 UTC

claymay83 September 20 2012, 01:03:05 UTC

This was great. The Christmas stuff reminded me of my own family holidays, in particular Jeff grudgingly holding up tree after tree with Annie finding fault with each one. Also loved the Jeff/Shirley and Annie/Britta conversations, in particular Britta’s fears. As someone who’s really just starting to begin their life on the cusp of leaving their twenties, I can identify with wondering if you still have time to do it all. And like Nyclove3 said, you can rarely go wrong with tub love.

Really glad you updated this fic. Can’t wait to see what else develops.

And on a personal note, I'm pulling for your guinea pig.

xtiltawhirlx September 21 2012, 04:11:34 UTC

The Christmas tree thing may or may not happen every year in my family and be the reason people hate going tree shopping with me, glad to know we're not the only ones :)

And thanks for pulling for my guinea pig, I think this is the end though. At this point I'm force feeding him baby food with a syringe :(