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milkywaycafe July 23 2015, 17:20:16 UTC
this was extremely, extremely cute, I was dying all along, thank you for this!
the characters and how you told the story were so on point, even if it was short ^^
I could picture all of these interactions from how touchy they actually are in real life haha like when it goes "the way he presses his forehead to junghwan’s temple, grinning" that wasn't even fiction he does this! ^^


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xstarlesscity September 12 2015, 21:46:39 UTC
oh wow!!! yeah i try rly hard to write them as they are in real life, to talk like they talk and think like they think... it's not 100% of the way there but sometimes there's moments where im like YEAH, THAT THING, HE TOTALLY DOES THAT IRL so im really really REALLY glad you noticed!!

thank you so much, this kind of detailed comment rly makes writing worthwhile :3

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mouthbites September 12 2015, 21:12:14 UTC
i've told you before how i feel abt this fic, but i realized i've never left a proper comment.

thinking about this fic hurts a bit, and it's a bit scary (some days more so than others), but also feels comforting and relaxing because it goes just the way it was supposed to go, you did everything the right way and that feels so safe. i think sometimes about wanting to prompt or read ace fic but i usually abandon those ideas because there are so many things that can go wrong and feel bad and i don't really trust a lot of people with writing it. but also i don't need more ace fic because you already wrote it, this is like THE ace fic and it's a great fic and very important to me

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mouthbites September 12 2015, 21:22:59 UTC
ok i'm rereading and WOW I AM CRYING. AGAIN.

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xstarlesscity September 12 2015, 21:50:32 UTC
i wrote this fic before i i'd as on the ace spectrum HAHA it's so obvious what kind of shit i was trying to work out. IT'S SO OBVIOUS NOW

honestly i will write ace headcanons w/ u all day every day, plz lets talk abt more ace experiences!!!!

honestly i will say- this DOESN'T satisfy me re: ace fic cause i feel like it's like.... like in this fic, the plot is junghwan negotiating aceness in his relationship... i want more fic that's like, ace characters who aren't even in relationships and just teasing their allosexual friends abt how gross they are, i want two ace characters in relationships with one another, i want ace characters in poly relationships, i want ace characters in situations where their aceness is like, to the left of the plot... like this feel like a toe dipped in the water but there's a WORLD of ace fic i want to read and write!!!!

but i'm SO glad that this fic meant something to someone........ that's what it was meant for. representation matters!!!

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mouthbites September 12 2015, 23:18:05 UTC
i have written some headcanons/fic-ish thoughts/things but they're all huge balls of angst lol, i am seemingly incapable of writing anything remotely optimistic re aceness

but

ace characters who aren't even in relationships and just teasing their allosexual friends abt how gross they are, i want two ace characters in relationships with one another, i want ace characters in situations where their aceness is like, to the left of the plot

oh god you're right, i want all of these things. i want happy ace stories and i want stories where the aceness doesn't even have to be negotiated, stories where the aceness is accepted fully and without conditions, stories where ace ppl never have to feel threatened by their allo partners' sexuality (no matter how understanding and good the partners are abt it) even if that means never dating allo ppl

(i would maybe like poly ace fic too except i actually had an au like that and it's the angstiest of angsts and it hurts a lot to think abt lmao /o\)

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writersstudy February 28 2016, 04:45:09 UTC
queer fics are my life and you do them so well and this is so good and the insecurity is represented so well and just really good job

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