Remember Your Allegiance

[xsilverxlightx]

Title: Remember Your Allegiance
Characters: Peter Pettigrew, Sirius Black, Unnamed Death Eaters
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1400
Summary: Peter and Sirius are attacked by Death Eaters while on an Order mission
Author's Notes: Written for trinityday 's prompt: "Sirius has to trust Peter with his life--And Peter comes through" for the Readers' Challenge at first_order

Comments

[vwl]

PETER FIC THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

I haven't ready Harry Potter fanfiction in like a year, and I saw this and I HAD TO READ IT. I love Peter. And you did not disappoint. <333333 I LOVE IT.

[xsilverxlightx]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I absolutely love Peter too and I love writing from his perspective on these sorts of things.

[entrenous88]

Oh, interesting look into Peter's frame of mind at the time -- I liked this.

[xsilverxlightx]

Thanks! I think Peter's mindset is really fascinating.

[luciusmistress]

So much love! Peter is one of the most underrated characters in the fandom and you represented him so wonderfully here! Intelligent, brave when he has to be, very much aware of the consequences of his actions... YES! Perfect!

[xsilverxlightx]

Thank you! It always bothers me when Peter gets portrayed as just stupid and weak. There's so much more to him! He's my favorite character to write.

[rhea_silverkeys]

Good job! It was a nice read and I thought you wrote Peter quite well. Too many fics show him as a loser and an obvious traiter. I liked the rationalisation you wrote for Peter turning against them.

I think this statement was very Sirius: "He said they hadn't seen enough action yet and it was about time. He was actually hoping they'd be attacked. It would prove that they were more capable than most of the veterans were giving them credit for."

[rhea_silverkeys]

Completely forgot to add this in my comment, but how did you get an image to appear instead of a smiley in your mood?

[xsilverxlightx]

Sorry I didn't get around to replying to this sooner. I'm glad you liked the story. ^.^

http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=64&q=mood%20theme This tells you how to apply a custom mood theme.

[rhea_silverkeys]

Thanks! I just a normal LJ user tho so unfortunately I cannot use them =( oh well!

[accioamber]

This is aboslutely fantastic. You're a wonderful author and you tolf that bit of story really, really well. It's so great to see the dynamic of Peter as a bad guy trying to be good. Really creative and original!

[xsilverxlightx]

Thank you so much! I really love that dynamic in him so I'm glad that came across well.