Your Life Doesn't Flash Before Your Eyes

Mar 25, 2010 14:10

Title: Your Life Doesn't Flash Before Your Eyes
Chapter: oneshot
Authors: xsilverxlightx 
Rating: R for violence and some swearing
Characters: Amelia Bones and Voldemort
Pairings: References to past Amelia/Lucius and current Amelia/Dawlish
Word Count: 2,951
Summary: Amelia Bones' death
Author's Note: Every other Amelia death fic I have read has bothered me because I ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fanfic: oneshot, wc: 2500+, c: amelia bones, harry potter, rating: r, c: voldemort, pairing: amelia/lucius, pairing: amelia/dawlish

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shiv5468 March 26 2010, 09:16:08 UTC
Very nice, thansk ofr sharing.

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xsilverxlightx March 26 2010, 19:02:37 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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:D anonymous March 27 2010, 06:29:23 UTC
In love with him, ;). Yepyep! Very gory, very painful, very... eeee for Amelia. xD <3 Love you, dear. It was thrilling.

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Re: :D xsilverxlightx March 27 2010, 06:44:42 UTC
Amelia is insisting that the "used to be" is the more important half of the sentence. xD

Oddly enough despite every other death story making me really sad, I'm completely okay with hers. It's strange. I was going for painful and gory (how can you not with the description of a death as very gruesome and by the DL himself?). <3

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luciusmistress April 4 2010, 20:37:23 UTC
I love to see real, serious dueling between competent withces/wizards! Although Amelia knew she didn't really have much of a chance, she fought so valiantly that I somehow forgot to be sad about her death. Instead, I'm thoroughly in awe of her now :)

Your writing was so powerful that I was so immersed in the fight that it felt almost like I was there. From now on, this is canon for me :)

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xsilverxlightx April 4 2010, 20:46:32 UTC
Thank you so much! Your comment made me very happy. I'm glad you liked it. I was definitely going for more terrible but awesome rather than sad with her death so I'm very glad that worked. :)

I like to think it would have gone something like this if her death had fully been described beyond vague but intriguing references to a very gruesome death at Voldemort's hands that was given in the book.

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dariclone June 1 2010, 22:12:17 UTC
Wow, this was brutal but very well written.

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xsilverxlightx June 1 2010, 22:16:55 UTC
Thanks! I was definitely going for brutal since one of the only details about her death was that it was a really nasty murder and obviously the Dark Lord isn't going to go easy on anyone who put nearly all of his followers in Azkaban.

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sueatducksfoot September 22 2011, 02:46:32 UTC
This is a very thought provoking fic. I thought so highly of it that I added it the Season 5 lineup for Potterficweekly.com. We recorded our thoughts on it tonight, but are backlogged and so it won't be released for about a year. I'll be sure to let you know when we get close to release and can send you a preview of the podcast before we go live, if you want. We are always interested in what the author has to say about our thoughts.

You can reach me at Sueatducksfoot@potterficweekly.com

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xsilverxlightx September 22 2011, 03:05:41 UTC
Oh wow. I am really flattered that you liked it so much. That's amazing. Thank you!

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sueatducksfoot August 4 2012, 05:19:49 UTC
I know it's been forever, but the podcast is finished and edited and I am planning to release it next Friday. If you'd like to get a preview, send me an email address and I'll send you a link to it. The podcast runs about an hour, but we get derailed for the first 30 minutes talking about cats, hair cuts and a super store which we will call Pigfarts. My email has changed, you can reach me at Sue@poufwa.com. I think the podcast turned out really well.

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xsilverxlightx August 7 2012, 19:21:32 UTC
Awesome! I can't wait to hear it. I'll send you an email now from idrillosengriol@gmail.com

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