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xsilverxlightx

You Are My Home (7/?)

Dec 09, 2011 22:15

Title: You Are My Home (7/?)
Pairings: pre-Rose/Nine
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG for this chapter
Author's Note: I really just can't stop writing this. I'll probably write at least one more chapter tonight.

( The Former Conman )

c: 9th doctor, wc: 1000+, doctor who, fanfic: you are my home, rating: pg, c: jack harkness

Comments 6

bloose09 December 10 2011, 04:46:05 UTC

I like how protective of Rose Jack is being. It really means a lot to Jack that the Doctor believes that he has changed and is not a conman anymore.

Another great conversation between character, this time Jack and the Doctor. It will be interesting to see what the Doctor is going to do. The way you write him, I am not sure when he is serious or just being cryptic.

This was my favorite part:
“Hopeless,” Jack repeats and shakes his head. “You need to send her flowers. A lot of them ( ... )

xsilverxlightx December 10 2011, 05:29:23 UTC

Protective!Jack is so adorable. I love writing him.

I'm not sure even the Doctor has figured out just yet whether he's being serious or not. xD

emraldeyedauter December 22 2011, 10:14:29 UTC

“You’d have to ask Lady Tyler’s permission and the woman would be your mother-in-law.”

The Doctor shudders at the thought. “Right. Just the flowers then.”

Haha, yep that might turn anyone man off.

You have the voices of these characters so perfect and thanks to such clear imagery I can see the whole thing unfolding frame by frame.

xsilverxlightx December 24 2011, 03:55:35 UTC

Thank you! It always makes me very happy to hear that people think I've got their voices right. I love writing their banter.

silverlunarstar January 15 2012, 08:57:37 UTC

Oh Doctor! "Only being polite" he says. What are we going to do with you?

There's always eloping... XD Hmm, I was writing this jokingly, but thinking about it, it is somewhat they're style, kinda... Hmm...

The man isn’t likely to really propose only the second time he’s seen the girl after all.

Why does this seem to have sealed it? Hee.

xsilverxlightx January 15 2012, 09:09:39 UTC

Jack is of course wondering the same thing. xD He may have his own ideas about being "polite" but his style of flirting is a bit different obviously and doesn't involve offers of marriage so he has no clue what to make of this.

Haha, well, you will find out soon...ish. xD