Cough Syrup {YongGuk/HimChan PG-13}

May 20, 2013 19:56


Title: Cough Syrup
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Pairing: HimChan/YongGuk
Warning: Medicine abuse
Type: One-Shot
W/C: 1634
A/N: This was based on Macklemore's Otherside. I highly suggest listening to that while you read it.

Cough Syrup )

b.a.p, fanfic

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igmyeongcheonsa May 21 2013, 02:21:09 UTC
Darn, I suck at commenting. ;A; But I'll try my best. ;w;

...Don't make me want to cry like that without warning. It's not nice. ;3; That's like the best I can do. I'm sorry. ;A;

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xsharetheworld May 21 2013, 18:37:38 UTC
It's okay~ :3 I'm glad to get a comment at all ;A; dnsafhks

-rolls onto you and camps out, wiping your tears- I'll write happy things then ;; <3

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blackheart_lies May 21 2013, 16:23:36 UTC
woah. gosh, this hits hard...
damn! woah.
this was good.

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xsharetheworld May 21 2013, 18:38:23 UTC
Thank you ^^; I really thought it was horrid and I don't know if it made sense but~ Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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myrto_23 May 21 2013, 20:13:39 UTC
That was...good. Dark. I didn't know that kind of drug at all, wow.
But poor himchan... Dunno if I like banghim here or not ;___;
Really liked it, well done!

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xsharetheworld May 22 2013, 19:47:06 UTC
I always feel like BangHim would be twisted and dark, I don't know why. ;A; Or HimUp. >< Never anything with Zelo cause he's so innocent but JongUp maybe. X3 Thank you! I know it's not really normal or probably not making sense but it was on a whim. ^^;

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laydee_ling May 22 2013, 20:31:22 UTC
Aww Himchannie ;~~~; How could Yongguk be so cold? It was a really good read! <3

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xsharetheworld May 24 2013, 01:29:21 UTC
Thank you! >< I don't know why I made this but it felt nice getting it out of me :3 <3

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nahcmih May 23 2013, 01:16:52 UTC
YOU JUST KILLED KIM HIMCHAN!!!!! OMG NO WHY WHAT NO CHANNIE NO MY HEART CANT TAKE THIS RIGHT NOW OMFG

dslkajgfilsjkdglgahjwelsukdjhfbliakjesdlnkfljhqoiwealshkfnljxhzlkbflkjdhlg STOP

omg ok this was so good and otherside is the perfect song for it omg maclemore is love <3

anyway, channie why did you do that??? WHY?? and yongguk should feel ashamed of himself omg so selfish and to just ignore channie's pain NOPE baddddddd bang yongguk T^T

beautifully written and perfect to read on a hot day like today. you just feel the raw emotions and i died a little when himchan finally let go T^T gooooo be free baby (even if you died *cry in a corner)

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xsharetheworld May 24 2013, 01:31:37 UTC
I'm sorry but I'm cracking up holy mother this was the comment of all comments lmao <33

I felt so bad killing him off but macklemore killed the kid in his song so I had to do it! ;A; but thank you for reading and leaving such an amusing comment XD <333

If I ever write more tics I hope you read and enjoy! ^^/

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nahcmih May 24 2013, 05:55:09 UTC
omg hahahaha im glad i made you laugh ^^ after reading my comment again i kinda realized how dramatic i was being but yeah.... great story hehe

and i would love to see more fics from you! i love angsty fics so this was just my cup of tea (even if they rip my heart out ;;) as much as i love reading happy fluff, broken!banghim is just so addicting ;; WHY MUST I LOVE ANGST????

but yeah, hope to see more from you! ●ㇷ●

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