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Suck Your Own Dick, See If I Care {Baro/CNU - NC-17}

Apr 28, 2012 01:16

Title: Suck Your Own Dick, See If I Care
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Baro + CNU
Warning: Smut
Type: One Shot
W/C: 1,341
Summary: I saw this and I couldn't help but make it into a fic. ^^

( Pointless But Real )

but why, b1a4, cnu, baro

Comments 7

sai12 April 28 2012, 17:07:56 UTC

Haha umm wow think this is a first. Why did it change from first person to the 3rd?

xsharetheworld April 28 2012, 20:07:00 UTC

Haha umm it slipped?

coreycontagious April 30 2012, 05:15:41 UTC

Oh haiiiii. I'm on Andie's phone reading this. :3

I found only one typo:

He swallowed hard when Baro's hips snapped forward a little too hard and made him choke one the head.

I believe for 'one the head', you meant 'on' instead. XD
Also, ihu because I am now all squirmy and can't do jack squat about it sobs.
Your smut fics somehow always have their way of doing this to me. ;~;
The weirdest thing about that is that it always seems to be pairings I don't really ship or know anything or much at all about certain groups. Like, I like b1a4, but I never really paid a whole lot of attention to much about them other than some songs of theirs on my iTunes. It happened with B.A.P. and Nu'est thanks to you. ^3^ <3 ( ... )

xsharetheworld April 30 2012, 18:10:26 UTC

LOL HOW MANY TIMES DID YOU EDIT THIS?? XD I have like .. 4 versions in my inbox. :3

Also, thank you kind miss, for pointing out my fails. OTL /too lazy to fix right now though 8D

But nsalfnsigjei I'm glad this didn't suck too bad cause it took me legit 20 minutes max and I was half asleep and there's not even personalities to them or anything. LOL And yes, Baro is younger. I think him and GongChan are the youngest. :3 They're all pretty much the same age. JinYoung is the oldest though, and the leader. lol /knows a lot cause Chelsea likes them tons

YOU COME HOME WITH SOUVENIRS ;A; I love you toooooo~~ /wondered somewhat if I would have to come and pick them up but then remembered you're in a different state entirely and was like /oh/ OTL XD

/jams to FACE as I type this and humps BaekRen's face all like OHHH YEEAAHHH 8| Okay I have to pee too lol I'll be on msn later :D

coreycontagious May 2 2012, 06:05:26 UTC

I think I edited it like five times. I HAD TYPOS AND ERRORS, OK? D:
You are so very welcurrrm. 8D *Fixes them for you* *'Cept not really* ... :D?

Pffff. Who needs personalities when you read sex? /fiend
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Personalities or not.
I DIDN'T KNOW THIS. I THINK A FIC SHOULD BE WRITTEN OF CNU CALLIN' BARO HYUNG. *Twiddles my thumbs patiently and eagerly* \^____^/
Ohhhh~ Chelsea likes them? o3o oic oic. I bought two of their albums yesterday afternoon when we made our last trip to Koreatown. c:

I CAME HOME WITH SOUVENIRS BUT...they aren't that speshur. OTL They're like...little bitty thingies. ;~; I'm sorry. I suck at souvenir shopping. I TRIED. DX *Laughs at your derpiness forever*

*Laughs at you some more with your humping and peeing and cries 'cause I think I was asleep or something and we played truth or truth last night and I learned some interesting secrets about everyone last night and e___e BE ON MSN TOMORROW NIGHT. LET ME LOVE YOU. SOBS.

Okay. That should be good. Hurhur~ /posts

coreycontagious May 2 2012, 06:07:03 UTC

And by tomorrow night, I mean later tonight since it's officially Wednesday, the second...at one in the morning.

........................

okaybai. c:

i_iz_cobra May 7 2012, 17:05:29 UTC

Proper comment time, yes? Finally? :D

First of all..a;dfsjldsfjf; I really like this and you can write well when you're coherent and you can write well when you're sleepy. /lurked on your convo with Corey. :D

ps. You use the 'but why' tag a lot. I laugh at you- I mean.. it. O.O
I love you~~