Cherry Tomatoes from Sunny Hill {Zelo/YongGuk + Zico}

[xsharetheworld]

Title: Cherry Tomatoes from Sunny Hill
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Zelo/YongGuk + Zico
Warning: Rape + Abuse + Underage
Type: One Shot
W/C: 5331
Summary: Zelo is a strange boy with strange ways and a not so strange past.

Comments

[i_iz_cobra]

SPOT. /goes to read
WHAT'S UP DELLY BOY?!

[xsharetheworld]

DELI BABY DELI.
/goes to change my icons

[i_iz_cobra]

Okay, this.. was just.. I told you on MSN that this was amazing. And it is!! Soo good! I almost cried when Zelo got scared and YongGuk held him and comforted him. XD
Zelo, you poor baby. Let noona love and cuddle you! YongGuk.. You care about that kid with the cherry tomato obsession..
And Zico... well.. I don't even know. Just.. a;jfd;jf NOO you don't hurt Zelo!

*coughsequelcough* :3

Thank you yeobeo~~

[xsharetheworld]

[evilblea]

Omg.... This is so... I don't even know... My words just can't flow out!!!
Loved the ending, glad Yongguk and Zelo got closer....
But Zico, you jdsjcbsdkcnsjdcbkdbscjsdcb. Nooooo... Don't hurt Zelo... !!!!

[xsharetheworld]

Sorry, I didn't even know this was gonna be a rape fic when I started it but it just kinda flowed that way. x3 Thank you for reading though! ^^ I wanted Zelo and YongGuk's relationship to be realistic and pure. :3

[chocomarijuana]

Oh my goodness.
This was so perfect to the extent I don't even know what to say... I mean... wow.
I like it how you incorporated Zico in this >3> and hell aren't I ecstatic to have more of it!
This was so terrifically gorgeous. Thanks for writing. OWO
I can't wait for more!

[xsharetheworld]

xD I wasn't planning on writing anything more... but now I might since a couple people have already asked for it. >< I thought it was really strung out while I was writing it but I guess it must be okay. xD Thank you for reading, even though I'm totally embarrassed that you read it. >w< ♥ I hope to see more from you too of Zelo/Zico/Mir! ^^

[chocomarijuana]

EMBARRASSED? XDDD Why embarrassed of all things?
I loved it, I told you >W

[plenty8]

aaaahhhh >.<

best and most well-written story i've read in a while, to be honest. loved the thing about the light, and Zelo's nervous habits were very realistic and well incorporated too!

but it was so sad..........T______T ugh. my poor baby Jello <3

will it be too much to beg for a sequel? because i'm begging for a sequel D:

I NEED VENGEANCE ON ZICO AND MY POOR HEART NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT D': do Yongguk and Zelo live happily ever after?? please say they do T____T

anyways, well done <3

[xsharetheworld]

I'm sorry I made Zico the bad guys, sob, I shouldn't have but it was perfect ;A; But thank you~ I tried to be super realistic with the human contact and how close the boys could get in so little time, without making it seem farfetched and whatnot xD
I'll think about what I could do for a sequel and I might write one tomorrow. ^^
♥ Thank you for reading!

[echomoon137]

This is really good and extremely well written and ;_; poor Zelo but yay for the ending with YongGuk and everything and kjdghregkgvregb

[xsharetheworld]

Thank you! ^^ I was running on 2 hours of sleep so I didn't think it would be good at all but I guess my writing is best when I'm barely awake. lol OTL But thank you for reading! :) ♥