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Apr 28, 2006 17:14

SUICIDE ( Read more... )

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clairenolen April 28 2006, 21:38:30 UTC
wonderful poem!
thanks for sharing!

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xrayzerase April 28 2006, 21:41:23 UTC
thank you
i was a little nervous to post it
anyway
thanks

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xrayzerase April 28 2006, 21:47:38 UTC
ps
i have to admit
the last 7 lines came later in thought
but it is kind of a two-sided sword...
or something like that

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clairenolen April 28 2006, 22:01:10 UTC
poetry is quite often like talking or listening to your subconsciousness.
Does it scare or irritate you?

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aarchaela April 29 2006, 13:30:37 UTC
I like this one. Well written.

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xrayzerase April 30 2006, 14:40:22 UTC
thank you

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